This was a very interesting chapter, I can't help but wonder what's going to happen next and as always look forward to your next update!
KyuubiPandoraChan (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Apr 2010
An amazing chapter. Love it. The way you describe the situation. You make Sesshoumaru vulnerable and yet you can still keep him in character. I cant wait for the next chapter.
M. Sheldon (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Apr 2010
Real, real nice. It's so good to find, finally, such a well-written SesshXKag's fanfic.. Please, keep up with the good work!
What an emotional chapter! I was glued to it from begining to end and can honestly say it was riveting! I'm loving this story so much! I really look forward to your updates! Thank you so much for sharing with us!
oooooooook....ithis story is really one of my favourites...most likely because i kinda know how it feels when you see people that you only knew as strong and independent get almost helpless like newborns too...
...i feel sad that something so horrible must have happened to sesshoumaru in order to suspect that kagome would really be cruel enough to let him starve...although we don't know that much about the status of their relationship in the feudal era in your story
...i only have to say one thing:
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE update as soon as you're muse strikes you/you'll find the time to do so >.<
i'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter
dayna (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Apr 2010
Man I loved this chapter. It had me on an emotional rollercoaster from beginning to end. I went from laughing to nearly in tears. I have to say that this story is like no other story I have came across on this site and I absoultely adore it. I love the way that Sessy is showing emotions even if he is not used to it but who can blame his after all that has happened to him. Him and Kagome are gonna be able to connect on a whole new level. I think their bond is gonna be so strong that NOTHING will be able to break it, and all because all they have are each other. Cant wait for the next update.
ananimos (Chapter 4) - Thu 15 Apr 2010
more more we want more
Saide (Chapter 4) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
Mere words cannot tell the expression I am feeling after reading all chapters of your work. I am simply stunned by all of this. This is wonderful, I'm gonna wait for your next chapters. :3
nursalina ng, malaysia (Chapter 4) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
Dear Shangri La,
I, respectfully thank you for sharing your heartfelt words in this fiction(?). I believe you are able to portray the characters magnificently which may be from your active imagination BUT more so through your work, experience, observation, listening and research. The lower half section of Chapter 4 is very touching. It reminds me that most of us do hear without listening and looking without seeing.
My sincere apologies should I be too presumptious.
I enjoy all your stories.
Thank you and best wishes.
Right so this chapter was absolutely beautiful, especially the end when Sesshomaru began to type and "talk" to Kagome. I like how you portrayed him; cool, calm, and mostly collected even being as needful as he is, and I think that you captured his personality perfectly. Kagome, as well, was magnificent in this chapter. A beautiful chapter, all in all, and I'll be waiting on the next update! Best of luck, and Much Love,
~Aubrey
Wow that was... deep towards the end, and here I always thought Kagome would have a knack for seeing things that weren't there lol. I can't imagine things are going to be easy, nor would I expect them to be considering the content of the last four chapters.
This is turning out to be a very fantastic story and I can't wait to see where it goes, keep up the great work!
dayna (Chapter 4) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
As usual another great chapter. I love the words that Sessy typed to Kagome about just enjoying silence. And I have to say that he is absoultely right. Silence can be a wonderful thing, just to bask in its peace and take the stress of the day away.
As I said before I knew he was going to be able to adapt very well with being in a time that is not his own even though he longs to be back in the fuedal era. I cant wait to see what other secrets Sesshomaru has in store for Kagome and the world. Will be waiting for another update. :)
jgem (Chapter 4) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
Another well written chapter! What I loved about this one though was all the little humorous moments in it: like Sesshoumaru peeking over Mokomoko, getting brain freeze, and sitting in his wheelchair like it is a throne.
What did find the last part to be interesting as well. Not just what Sesshoumaru says about taking time to just enjoy the silence, but as of yet, you have not really mentioned much as to how Kagome is "mentally" from not being able to get to the past. Perhaps she has been keeping herself too busy to really do the healing she needs to do as well.
I love how this story is getting me to "think" and not just read.
Wow!! What an amazing chapter!! I loved the way Sesshomaru expressed his contempt for talking, and how Kagome learned so much from this! Sesshomaru has always been such a deep character and his mind in this chapter illustrates how intense his feelings and emotions really are!!
Thank you so much for updating! I look forward to the next chapter with much anticipation!!
Hugs:
MidCat
This is getting really good.
I can't get over the originality of the story. It's brilliant, really.
stars (Chapter 4) - Wed 14 Apr 2010
please updata
Ahh beautiful! I hope he gets rehabilitaed soon and can get up and walk on his own. I know this is "Embrace the slience" but I hope he does speak soon. And maybe some sparks can fly between them. ;) I also can't wait to find out what happened to him.
I like the slow pace you're taking with his recovery because it's more realistic. It's so precious the way she cares for him in such detail. I don't think anything you've wrote so far detracts from the story and I'm glad you're not glossing over certain details. I think it would take away from the story to skip them. I feel your heart is in this story and I'm soaking up every bit of the emotion that radiates from the page.
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