Wow. These chapters are simply amazing. I absolutely love how you actually wrote his improvement. I have nothing but words of awesomeness for you, and this story~! <33333 Can't wait till the next update.
I read through all the available chapters last night, and I must say that, while I have read a good number of well-written fics, this one had me by the brain stem and would not let go. I saw the sneak at Spark too. I commend you on the length of time you spent on this particular work and the amount of research (or perhaps, information gleaned from real-life experiences?) infused into the chapters drew me into this little universe you've created and made it thoroughly realistic.
Sesshoumaru's helpless state and Kagome's oscillation between despair and determination being his caregiver tugged at the heartstrings, made the corners of my mouth turn down at some points and made me cheer at others.
I enjoyed the pace you set, peeling off one layer of the story at a time, never rushing, always leading. Kudos for a story that is extremely well-done :) I look forward to future chapters!
I had to leave you a review about you story. I absolutely love it!
Sesshomaru has a horrible case of PTSD though. I really feel for him during the flashbacks.
I can't wiat to read more.
Maria (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
Wow! Just wow. There aren't many fanfics anymore that seem original or that can keep my interest past the first chapter, but this is deffinitely one that is... I LOVE it! Keep the chapters coming! :D
I really hope that one day he'll be able to open up to kagome about what happened to him, and I hope he can get better. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
This chapter had a spot of laughter, other times a warm feeling. Such as when she presented him with the top he had wanted. At the end was the heart wrenching moment that you just wanted to embrace him and erase his scars mentally and physically. They are becoming so close that I don't believe they would ever be happy apart.
If this whole story was posted I could read through the whole thing without stopping!
fatcatmom (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
Excellent read and very engaging story. Kagome fears abandonment but she will help Sess recover, find out who did what to him, and plan to avenge his wounds. Based on how quickly the gastric tube healed nothing is wrong with his healing abilities so he has been cursed somehow with the scars on his back. Thanks for your excellent work and please update soon!
fatcatmom (Chapter 3) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
Hooray! He's responding.....GREAT JOB ON THIS STORY! Can't wait for the next chapters!
Saide (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
That was definitely quick of you, ugh....I wanna cry everytime Sesshomaru becomes too melancholic. T^T
stars (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
please updata
Oh, I sooo owe you reviews for this story! It is excellent. It is obvious that you are a member of the nursing field, your familiarity with care and rehab are obvious, however, your writing skills overshadow your nursing skills. Wonderful complex characters, each with their own motivations and an intriguing storyline that has me as hooked as any drug could! You have mad skills, girl, and I am loving this tale.
This is a very touching fic with a vulnerable Sesshomaru having to deal with the modern era after a long sleep. I'm sure it's not easy dealing with a patient who's been in a vegetative state for a long time before a slow recovery. Can't wait for more.
Saide (Chapter 5) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
the way you write is like I'm watching a very emotional movie. ;__; it's making me very emotional, and I'm loving it! <3
Page 22 of 25
| | | | | | | | | | | | |