OMG about damn time! I mean he was getting stupid for a sec. Poor Kagome, how can he even begin to make this up to her. Im mean the fact that h's fallen in love with her. Im guessing he didnt use protection at all during his sexual assault. Update soon please!!!!!

OMG! he found out that he had the wrong girl! what is he going 2 do now? how will kagome react 2 him when she knows that he found out the truth? will she forgive him after she was....forced? i want 2 know the answers 2 my questions ASAP in the following chapters. thanx 4 updating!

How will she ever stop him? Kagura could walk in?

. . . Oh, please, not another rape fic!!!  DX

omg! is he going 2 rape her!? poor kagome!

please update! can't wait to see what will happen next!

poor kagome! :(

can't wait to see sesshomaru's reaction when he will realize that he made the biggest mistake of his life

please updata

i love it u must continue i need to know what happens next!!

What the-? Is his nose broken or something? How can he not tell that the woman he has captive is NOT Kikyo? I guess that's what happens when you're hell-bent on revenge. It clouds your senses. Can't wait to see what happens when he finds he has her cousin as a hostage. Good work.

Interesting story, and well-written.  I'm really enjoying this!

cant wait for an update. Im really liking this.

ugh so close to finding out that it wasnt Kikyo he has! Cant wait for next chapter!

ooh I can't wait for the moment sesshomaru will see the real kikyo during the meeting and realized that he really had gotten and torture the wrong girl!

hope it's in the next chapter!

I really can't wait!!!

wow... nice job! now is Kagura gonna look for the real Kikyo? Or is Kagome willing to take Kikyo's punishment just fo her cousin isnt hurt? How does Sesshy find out he doesnt have Kikyo?

Wow, I can see Sesshy being this cruel.  He was cruel like that in the early episodes of the anime, remember?  I wonder how he is going to react when he figures out that he has the wrong girl?  And especially, when he discovers that Kagome is a very sweet girl, and noble.  HaHa, I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!  I'm very perverse, and love to see both of them suffer, before they manage to get together and live happily ever after, so make him do more truly aweful, unforgiveable things to her before he finds out his mistake, okay?

i can't wait to see how sesshoumaru is going to react when he finds out its not really kikyo. its so frustrating to see how kagome tried to tell him other but he wouldn't listen. ah! the suspense. keep up the good work

I like the way you think. However your story is all over the place. I recommend that you get a beta that can help you with the details and grammer. I am a writer myself and I know how hard it is for you to check your own work. That being said, I think you have the potential for a great story but be careful:

Spell cheque can own lee do so much!!!

Good luck.

Actually I know this story from long ago. I am lucky to live in a border town and have seen this soap opera from Mexico named 'La Mentira' and it is based on a novel in 1952 by Mexican author named Caridad Bravo Adams . The novel has the same name and alternate title of the book: El amor nunca muere aka Love never dies. The summary is awesome. Your version of it is awesome too .Keep writing.^_^

I like your story. Update soon.

You have many spelling and grammatical errors.