A wonderful story.  I liked how the plot moved along quickly, and the slow development of the story.  Several times, I was emotionally moved by what was happening in the story, and I am grateful that your writing is so well done that it can move me in that way.  I look forward to reading more of your writings in the future, so please don't disappear! :)

WOW! is all i can say. this was a story that was short, but well worth the time to read. i loved it. you are a great writer. i hope you cam finish your other stories as well b/c i want to read them. keep writing and i'll keep reading. c'ya'

Loved it cute 

Okay, girl. You bought me to tears. Great job and an even greater story.

An amazing story, that I am so glad to have found and experianced. It was a bit bittersweet at the end, but I loved it so.

Raised eyebrows

I wonder how mad Kagome is going to be when she learns that the guilt in Sesshomaru's eyes is as much because he killed Inuyasha as because he didn't save him... And that Sesshomaru didn't tell her... And that he's basically just using her (at this point), instead of out of a genuine desire to protect.

Lots and lots of interesting things here: Misako and Izayoi, how the youkai die out before Kagome's time, her return. I find myself wondering if Sesshomaru will ever figure out why Inuyasha wasn't able to fight full out, and what had diminished his spirit. I suspect (because of the Romance tag on the story) that he will.

This fits very nicely with how you openned the story. I wonder how Sesshomaru's life would be different if his father had shared it (and the origins of youkai) before...?

I love the mythology/history that you've created for the beginning of this story.

All I have to say is,AWESOME.Freaking AEWSOME!And so sweet:-)

Very good! Interesting way to kill off demons 

Poor Inuyasha 

Love the intro!

Thank you so much. that was perfect.

That was amazing! Great story I hope to read more of your work! ^_^ One of the best portrayals of Sesshy i've ever read.

beautiful story! i absolutely love it!

After I found out that you planned to kill the youkai off I really wanted to not read this story... I've tried reading this story before a few months ago but couldn't get throught the first chapter and then when I saw it again I'm like whatever maybe I should give it a chance. I honestly didn't like the fact that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's relationship was so troubled but it did give a good plot ot it. I find this fanfic very interesting and I thought it was very well plotted.. ANyway I like the ending where they fell into the ocean and they became one and stuff... It was romonically sad and enduring... Anyway this story was great..

A very unique ending!! I really enjoyed your story, thanks for sharing :)

This story is so unique! You did a wonderful job of keeping Sesshomaru and Kagome in character. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Great Story! What a wonderful new twist you used for this story. It was different from the same old-same old,  stories about this pairing. Thank you very much, it was wonderful.