Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Mizui (Chapter 57) - Sat 08 Sep 2012

I laughed so hard reading this, the girls across the hall came to make sure I was okay. I can just imagine the look on little Sesshy's face as he thinks through the new problem.


Mizui (Chapter 10) - Sat 08 Sep 2012

I absolutely love this! The entire story is just so adorable, not to mention how your writing blows mine out of the water, but wow. I just can't get over how cute Sesshoumaru is being! 

 

I just don't even have words to tell you how much I am enjoying your story.

Thank you for sharing it with us all. 


ravynevrmor (Chapter 100) - Wed 20 Jun 2012

You have a real talent. By far, the best writing skills I've ever seen from a non-published author. The way you stay on track with the storyline, never forgetting the small things that tie it all together, even in massively detailed projects, amazes me. I bow to your skills. If Rumiko were to read this story, I couldn't imagine her not wanting to do a sequel. I think the greatest thing is that you stayed in character, no matter the age/era. Little Sesshomaru was just as arrogant as Big Sesshomaru. And all of your original characters have heart. They are not just fillers, the reader can almost invision them, as if they were real characters from the original show. I am now a proud forthright convert, and shall begin the task of reading all of your work.

Bravo and Encore many times over~


Faded Names (Chapter 100) - Wed 13 Jun 2012

You are sooovery awesome!!!!


Sapphyre (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 May 2012

I hope you are aware that you have taken over my life. =] This is the fourth time I'm reading this story. I would draw something for it, but the best I can manage is a stick figure. =P SO, I'm going to stick with being a super fan. =] 


AngelHeart2122 (Chapter 100) - Tue 03 Apr 2012

This is such an amazing story! I love how young Sesshoumaru was so tough yet so sweet and innocent all at once. You did a wonderful job of making everything come together in the end. I look forward to reading more of your stories.


Hesunohana (Chapter 100) - Sun 25 Mar 2012

I hadn't read the last one. well, it's done. great, as usual ! and sweety too. bravo !


Bird That Flies At Dawn (Chapter 100) - Fri 10 Feb 2012

Wow, this fic was amazing. The plot was so deep, the story so detailed and intricate. I absolutely loved it.


Bookwrm150 (Chapter 100) - Mon 02 Jan 2012

Gah! This is one of my alltime favorite stories! I've read it probably 5 times.....nah, maybe more? Love, love, love it!


Kuroisuna (Chapter 100) - Tue 20 Dec 2011

The Master Storyteller has done it again. This is one story I wouldn't mind reading over and over. Simply amazing.


Aoi-Kaji (Chapter 100) - Mon 05 Dec 2011

D'awww! So heart warming! This is such a wonderful and beautiful tale of sesshoumaru and kagome =) thank you for giving us the priveledge of having the extended versions. The ending was perfect and I don't think anyone could have executed it nearly as well as you, forth-chan


Aoi-Kaji (Chapter 99) - Mon 05 Dec 2011

Omfg! I am shaking with anticipation!! The last chapter is near! This is definitely my favorite chapter. I was completely engolfed in the hot description of their kiss and my heart was totally going out to sesshoumaru <3


Aoi-Kaji (Chapter 97) - Mon 05 Dec 2011

Aww! This was waaaaay funny! I had to look up what a "fundoushi" was and I couldnt stop my muffled giggling to burst through the cracks of the fingers on the hand covering my mouth! And it is so sweet how the guys are trying to push them to their true path. I had never thot about inuyasha and Rin together but it's a good coupling!


Aoi-Kaji (Chapter 51) - Fri 02 Dec 2011

D'awww! I second kagomes motion c:


Aoi-Kaji (Chapter 40) - Fri 02 Dec 2011

Omg omg omg!!!! I was wondering about the stud muffin sesshoumaru! This is exciting!


Aoi-Kaji (Chapter 39) - Fri 02 Dec 2011

Awww!!! The end totally is true and made me cry like a babe


Aoi-Kaji (Chapter 37) - Fri 02 Dec 2011

Aww! So cute! I can't  believe they don't kno how to swim! This will make an exciting read once I get to the  chapter she teaches them


Aoi-Kaji (Chapter 34) - Thu 01 Dec 2011

Ah, so wise, dear forthright c:


Aoi-Kaji (Chapter 32) - Thu 01 Dec 2011

Awww! This totally made my heart reach out to poor kagome. I love how you used something in the show to your favor with ah-un and kagomes first meeting =)


Aoi-Kaji (Chapter 30) - Thu 01 Dec 2011

Gah!! You are so deliciously clever! I had to just go back to chapter 26 before I understood the egg comment!


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