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Reviews for Impeccable by forthright

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BennaBear (Chapter 20) - Mon 01 Jun 2009
I really like your story its very unique and interesting but it's kinda makes me mad that they are so short! I would get into a reading moment and then boom the chapter is over. I would rather wait a little longer for a nice long chapter then have little chapters in small periods of time ^_^ Keep up the great job can't wait till next chapter!

Eri (Chapter 19) - Fri 29 May 2009
This story is great and it's really interesting but WHY on earth r the chapters so short? I've seen short chapters but this is just ridiculous. Every chapter is nothing more than two or three paragraphs I mean come on. U can't even call each chapter a short essay which is usually a page or a 3/4 of a page long. Sigh whatever hmmm u haven't been writing long have u? I excused the first few chaps because intro maybe there isn't much to say. But u can't continue the entire story in this format. A lot more ppl wud read if u were to set it up more properly caz believe it or not it does turn readers off. But hey u know what no one critiques u better than urself n a year or 2 from now I want u to come read this thing n u'll definitely see what I'm talking about. I'm telling u this from experience.

Kanela (Chapter 18) - Thu 28 May 2009

I was like kyaaaaa!! imagining Sesshoumaru going to the rescue hahaha. I love your story (:


BennaBear (Chapter 18) - Thu 28 May 2009

ajowi-sama (Chapter 16) - Wed 27 May 2009
am loving it! please update soon

SilentlyFuming (Chapter 16) - Tue 26 May 2009
lol, she was sliding down the railing? *^_^* sounds like fun (at first I didn't get it, I had to read it again, sneaky humor, me likes)

Kanela (Chapter 16) - Tue 26 May 2009

I'm liking it, a lot.It's just so very short but interesting....I wanna read more, please (:


Asuka-sama (Chapter 15) - Mon 25 May 2009
Hey! I just saw this story and I decided to check it out, and...I LOVE IT! It's a really cute story and I can't wait till the next chapter! Update soon! :D

DaiyoukaiGeisha (Chapter 14) - Mon 25 May 2009

I like the story as a whole, but this chapter is my favorite so far. Especially the end...it was almost like he was saying, "Yeah, yeah, eat your veggies you ignorant human!" LOL, good job.


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 14) - Fri 22 May 2009
Haha! *^_^* Okay that was one of my favorite so far, (you almost made me laugh out loud in the middle of psych.), I hope to see another soon!!!

SilentlyFuming (Chapter 10) - Tue 19 May 2009
Have I told you how much I love this fic? It's so good! And I love the small chapters the only downside is I REALLY REALLY REALLY WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.... Please update again soon!!!

Sessylove219 (Chapter 10) - Mon 18 May 2009
I find these to be quite enjoyable. I hope she lets poor Sesshy go, but if she does, how will they ever have hot monkey (or is it dog?) sex? lol. Anyways, good job!

InuYoukaiLiz (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 May 2009

For so few words this is a great story. Keep up the good work ^^ . I wouldn't mind having Inupapa as my butler.... *starry fangirl eyes*  XDD


knifethrower (Chapter 9) - Fri 15 May 2009
I'm the kind of person who avoids candy, because I am inclined to scarf down the whole box in one sitting. So I always want you to write MORE. Something really long, like "Gone With the Wind". What you do write, though, is always my FAVORITE, even though you only dole out one little, precious piece at a time. Leaving me, as always wanting more...

Mikurai (Chapter 8) - Fri 15 May 2009
*stares in awe* How do you do it? Such short chapters and yet they say everything that needs to be said! Wish I could do that, do wish for slightly longer chapters to prolong the encounters, but it's very understandable that you're busy. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I think I'll skip along to some of your other fics during the wait. Keep up the good work!! =^_^=

knifethrower (Chapter 8) - Thu 14 May 2009
Kagome thinks the house needs a family (Kagome needs a family). Bet Sango and Miroku will go a long way toward making her feel less lonely, but she'll need something more as well... Great writing!

(Chapter 8) - Thu 14 May 2009
Hey! I just found your story and I find it interesting. I like your idea, but I just wish for slightly longer chapters. I realise that you must not have that much time. Please realise that I mean no harm in saying that. I really do like the story. Please continue :)

SilentlyFuming (Chapter 7) - Wed 13 May 2009
This is pretty good so far, I'm interested to see where you take it! I love how you put the chapters in small intervals but with enough importance, it keeps out the useless fluff (not the warm and fuzzy kind, but the scratchy/suffocating/spew-smelling/aggravating kind of fluff XP)

knifethrower (Chapter 7) - Wed 13 May 2009
Awww, Miroku and Sango! How do you say so much with so few words?

knifethrower (Chapter 6) - Tue 12 May 2009
Hojo, an attorney, calling Sesshomaru "hamless". That's rich!

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