Sorry I didn't leave a review for the last chapter hopefully this makes up for it....
THIS IS MY FAVORITE.
I found a story so different from all the others without the same ole plot of a triangle relationship or battles of long ago made new. This story is amazing so simple yet so heartfelt that I can't help but read it over and over until I see a new chapter. The field trip to the aquirium was so thought out and I believe it helped bind Sesshomaru and Kagome as something clearly undefined that hopes are kept and dreams can be made with a little help from the former Shikon no Miko.
Now I loved the chat Sesshomaru had with himself realising his son meant more to him than the land of his fore fathers. He shown a side he would never have in the past for his part in it all I am glad it only took a few years than centuries for him to realize what was important. The picture you painted of him reading the book to Haine was beautifully done. I loved it, truly a remarkable piece of work. I enjoyed the thought of Kagome's eyes looking down at him saying "It'll be okay." Her belief gave him hope he didn't have which also endeared Kagome to him and Haine even more without him even knowing. Then to wrap the evening up with a drink with his brother Inu Yasha. Can't wait to read more...
Thank you for what you have written thus far.
I love how Sesshomaru has a good support system between his mom and Inuyasha. I look forward to reading the next scene. Thanks for the update :)
I love this story I normally read on AO3 but when I saw it here I couldn't help myself... I just had to read the chapters.... I really hoped Sesshomaru would have gave Haine's mother and grandfather more feral type of threats but it was all good... Can't wait to see what happens next.
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