This story, although on having two chapters, is very good. I enjoyed reading it and am happy to say that it sucked me in. I was disappointment when I could not read more. Please keep up the good work and I hope to see more of your stories.
Snickie
Wicked Wolf- Mon 09 Jun 2008
Cool idea. I was wondering if the story were any farther along on another site. I hope to read more soon.
WhiteRose-Kurama- Mon 09 Jun 2008
I really enjoyed the first 2 chappies of this fic. Does all this take place after the defeat of Naraku? I just want that clarified because you haven't mentioned Inuyasha, kikyou, sango or miroku. And what exactly is the legend of the warrior miko? Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie. :P
Lauryn D.- Sat 07 Jun 2008
Your story has a very good start, I'm very interested in reading how it unfolds. I just found a few things quite odd. From your summary, you said the battle has been won and this fic is in the AU category, so my questions are what battle has been won? And what is the history of her interactions between the characters? Is it based off of that of the canon universe. If so, I find it really odd that Kouga was more concerned with her finding out about who his father and not the fact that when they first met his wolves had slaughtered an entire village and he kidnapped her. I don't know if this is the feeling that you are trying to give off but it seems to me that Kagome is a little full of herself. I all for having confidence, especially wielding as much power as she does but geez can she tone it down a little. Let her strength show through her actions.
Nice beginng. Please update soon.
*hugs and smiles*
OH I am interested in seeing where this is going, and the background story behind it. Cool first chapter.
Once this site becomes read only, where do you plan to take your story??
Anywho, update soon. Toodles.
SabakuMoon- Sat 24 May 2008
GREAT! I really like this story a lot. update soon.
magik- Sat 24 May 2008
That a great start...please continue...
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