Great story! Can't wait for an update!

owww sooo niceee...... poor kags....

dang you lady, shouldn't the next one be up by now? I was really getting into it.

my online time at the moment is sketchy at best, so you'll have to wait till I get home for a better review...If you want my nit picky grammar mistakes, send me your e-mail and I'll let ya know. Otherwise right now all I have to say is over all I likey! The first section though doesn't give me the feel that she can't have children, but rather the feel that she has lost a child. kk, hi bye

Very good start. Can't wait for more.