Reviews for To Save The Race by Kirara
leonzite- Tue 29 Jul 2008
hope u update soon the concept is very original and fresh, keep up the excellent work, and hope to read from u more...
lover- Fri 18 Apr 2008
i hope you up date soon i realy like it
Kagome357- Sat 12 Apr 2008
Your story and concept are very original, but you suffer from structuring issues. The second chapter read better than the first so I think you'll improve as you streamline your story. Nice job...