Reviews for American Vacation by Lady Ky

Jasmine- Tue 06 May 2008
plz write more

slayer_of_hearts- Tue 06 May 2008
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!! This is just too good to stop reading!!!! I would like to see what kind of lawyer would help him now!!!!! ^_^

LordSesshomaruLover16- Tue 06 May 2008
UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE DYING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY I WANT MORE SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!


THANK YOU YOUR FAN LordSesshomaruLover16

slayer_of_hearts- Thu 01 May 2008
JA JA JA Man he is SCREWED!!!!!!! GO KAGOME!!! CAN'T WAIT TILL U UPDATE SOON!!!!

kimberly- Thu 01 May 2008
lmao man is he screwed...can't wait to find out what happens to him

anonnie mouse- Thu 01 May 2008
crap...*whistles* Sess is screwed....big time.....*evil laughter* GO KAGOME!!!!!
when are you gonne update A Surprise 500 years in the Making? I hope you update that one next.....SO GOOD! All your stories are good come to think of it....

Youkerie~- Wed 30 Apr 2008
umm your prologue is actually a repeat of chapter three.... you might want to fix that.

heather- Wed 30 Apr 2008
i love this story please update soon

TheMikoShivae- Wed 30 Apr 2008
i wish i could read this.. but i can't.. the prologue is chapter 3.. xD so.. please fix this so i can read?

snowbird- Mon 21 Apr 2008
Thank you so very much for the update. I've been keeping my eyes on this story since your other update in Oct 07. Please, if possible, don't wait so long between updates. You have a beautiful little story here and it deserves your attention.

It seems Sesshoumaru is behaving like a spoiled child. No matter how much he may try, he's a father. I bet he even trys to avoid being at his father's home whenever Kagome is there with Rin. But I bet time and his conscious will eat at him. Hey, have his father put an enlarged copy of the picture of Kagome and the twins somewhere that Sesshoumaru can't miss having to look at it. His father is going to be proud to be a grandfather and will probably have more than one copy hung at home and at work. With him talking proudly about his granddaughter, naturally people are going to congratulate Sesshoumaru on being a father and some may even give their sympathies over the death of his son. All this will prey on his conscious. Look at me! I'm always trying to guess what the auther has in mind for future updates.

elizabeth hogan- Mon 14 Apr 2008
how about being a little quicker on the updates hope to here from you soon

~ CelestialTenshi ~- Wed 26 Mar 2008
Hope you update soon!!!

rebe- Wed 26 Mar 2008
love the story update soon

SessyGurl- Tue 25 Mar 2008
awww!, Sessho was an ass, but that's him. Please write more!

Erneica Booker- Tue 25 Mar 2008
Hi i just wanted to tell you i think i found the story that you were looking for. Its called 'Two Lives Turned Upside Down' i cannot recall what the name of the author is. But I loved reading that story. So i hope its the one you were searching for.

Anonymous- Tue 25 Mar 2008
How will Sesshoamru feel about the family dinner gathering, or will he not show up?

Inu seems to approve of Kagome being perfect for his son, only met her seconds. He also seemed to have forgotten his public-sized announcement about Sesshomaru marrying Kagura. Part of the reason why Kagome didn't want to tell Sesshomaru.

I sure thought Kagome would be decline the family dinner, but allowed Rin to be there with Kikyo.

Funny how Sesshomaru didn't remember her till he saw her in person.

Wonder how long before Kagura finds out that Seeshomaru already has a family. Especially since it will change everything.

Wonder if she finds out before or after the press does.

Please update ASAP

This is really, really great. You should be very proud of yourself. ^u^

Nesa- Tue 25 Mar 2008
please hurry to update this story i really like it please email me when you have updated it. i almost cryed when kisho died.

hope_midnight- Sat 22 Mar 2008
If you need someone to read and correct grammar, I can help, if you wish. Until your normal betas appear once again.
Give me an email.

Riot- Sat 22 Mar 2008
aha! Vegas is WAY worst than that.
Trust me I live there.

Considering I only read the first chapter at the moment, I'm wanting to suggest you take them down Fremont street, and into Jilian's bar, or another club.

yupyup :D



Briana- Fri 21 Mar 2008
write more what is going to happen to her

snowbird- Thu 03 Jan 2008
Please update this beautiful story. This plot is unique. I feel sad for Kagome for loosing her son. At least she had some time with him whereas Sesshoumaru had none. I wonder if he will feel resentful towards her for denying him that time. At least there is Rin for them to try and build a relationship around.

heather- Wed 14 Nov 2007
i love this story please update soon

Tensaiga- Tue 30 Oct 2007
omg omg omg love this story!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!! omg 3's xD

anyways lol update soon but like you should post this story on www.justexpressing.com :) so that other ppl can read it omg its so good xD

shrinemaiden05- Sun 28 Oct 2007
update soon please...

dw- Sun 28 Oct 2007
please write more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

jasmine- Sun 28 Oct 2007
please write more

sharilynn- Sun 28 Oct 2007
HAha i like that last part this story is really good i have been following this story and well i think you need to keep on writing.
Sharilynn

elizabeth e hogan- Fri 21 Sep 2007
come on now please write the next chapter can't wait to see what's instore for our favorite couple next please update

stephi- Sat 01 Sep 2007
ok i don't normally review, but while i do like your story the reason i'm reviewing is the Colorado part....i used to live there and i miss it, mostly the view of the mountians...anyway goodluck with everything

elizabeth e hogan- Fri 31 Aug 2007
please update soon this is a very enteresting story now how is sesshomaru going to find out about babies are they going to be together

Hikarinohime- Fri 31 Aug 2007
The story you are looking for is Two Lives Turned Upside Down... And you story is wonderful by the way.

sharilynn- Fri 31 Aug 2007
this is really really good please write another one :)

marquishawright- Fri 31 Aug 2007
i hope u pudate the story soon i so luv this. i can't believe that kagome had a son i can't wait until fluffy finds out about all of trhis stuff happening so luv this i hope u update the story soon

toni- Thu 30 Aug 2007
OH WHEN SESSHY GONNA FINDS OUT?

tomoko-chan- Mon 20 Aug 2007
Story is going good so far , speeding a bit with some errors but i do want to see where it's going. Keep it up and the story your looking for is Ditry little Secret by Momo-Desu

here is the link.

http://a-single-spark.com/fanficread.php?fid=5552&cid=1


there is also a sequel

http://a-single-spark.com/fanficread.php?fid=5848&cid=1&Go=Go

enjoy

Ja Ne

toni- Sat 18 Aug 2007
oh i'm loving this!! hopefully the baby (i think ur name would be rin) is ok and sesshou will find kagome soon

anonnie mouse- Sat 18 Aug 2007
okay so they're miko, youkai, and hanyo right??

so Rin's gonna have kawaii puppy ears??? or is Kags power strong enough to make Rin a full youkai???

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

kogome- Sat 18 Aug 2007
OMG OMG THIS IS SUCH A GREAT STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOOON!!

marquishawright- Sat 18 Aug 2007
i hope u update soon i can't wiat until fluffy finds out that he is having a baby comin

cReaT1Ve- Sat 18 Aug 2007
OOOOOOOOH!!!
ME LIKEY SO FAR!!!
But I have to wonder...is Shippo going to be in this? I hope so...
^.^
Please updatesoon...or else...muhahahahahaha! LoL

kagsbigfan- Sat 18 Aug 2007
The story's called Dirty Little Secret and there's a sequel, No More Secrets.

Physical Graffiti- Sat 18 Aug 2007
Thanks for updating! I soooo want to know what happens! Will Rin come too early, will Sesshoumaru figure out who he slept with, and other bunches of stuff. I got confused though, is Sesshoumaru really getting married? To who? Anyways love the fic! :)

Physical Graffiti- Fri 17 Aug 2007
I like the way your fanfic is coming along and at first I thought it would be Inyasha that Kagome left at home, but then I realized it wasn't. I can't wait to see who it is and how Sessho remembers who Kagome is. I mean probably Kagome will remember if she sees his face (though she was drunk), but I don't think Sessho will remember because he almost totally forgot that he slept with someone. Please continue writing I really want to see how the girls and guys meet up. (>_)b

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