I love the fact that you're doing a fic set in Scottland. I really love reading Scottish Romances and stories in general whose culture is different. Keep up the good work! The reason that I rated you as a 9 in Style/Flow/Organization is that I feel that your story could flow a little better. All of that description about Sesshoumaru and the scenery feels like a mouthful just reading about it. I rated you as a 9 inSpelling/Grammar because there were a few spelling mishaps that detracted from the quality of your story, like to instead of using too or writing course instead of curse. Please don't feel that I'm just criticizing you because that is not my intent. I simply want you to be able to write to the best of your abilities and hope that my comments help you to do so. I look foward to reading the next chapter. Toodles!

Ummm... Actually, Brigadoon is set in Scotland.