O My Gosh!!!! YOUR BACK!! I Had Started 2 Wonder If U Just Left Us Hanging! PLEASE Update As Soon As U Can!!!! I LOVE This Story!!

Kagome-Chan

I am so glad i decided to read this fic, because when I went to your profile I seen that you are an author who completes your stories. I look forward to the next chapter!

Ohmigosh!!!! HE KISSED HER!! That Was Gr8! I Love How He Decided 2 Kiss Her Again At the Last Minute!!!! PLEASE Update As Soon As U Can!!

Thanks!

Kagome-Chan ♪

Cute story, please update soon.

OMG!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY! AND I KNOW THERE WILL BE TROUBLES SOON WITH OMIGUMO

AMG I FREAKING LUV THIS FIC!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Write More Soon!!

Peace, Luv, and Paint Smears,

Kagome-Chan ♥

Woot! I love it! You have a few spelling problems in there along with some left out words, but it was wunnerful! Keep it up, chick-a-biddy. I can't wait!

I like it a lot! It's very cute. And Sesshy is such a good daddy! Can't wait for the next chapter!

This Chapter Was Sad, Cute, (Slightly) Romantic, and Funny!!!! U R a Gr8 Writer!! I Hope U Keep Writing! Please Update Soon!!!!

Peace, Luv, and Candles,

Kagome-Chan

i lovee itt=]

the getting Rin to use proper English sentence was good but was totally ruined by the next sentence [Now why don’t you and me show your father here all of the stuff you have done, huh how does that sound,” Kagome smiled taking the girl’s hand as she stood up. ]
It should be why don't you AND I show your father....
for a compound subject just try one subject at a time in the sentence to see if it's right
you show your father.......
ME show your father(uhhu)
I show your father(yep)

it makes it much easier.....
sorry about aybe over doing it but my mom raised me to always say "AND I", then it was very traumatic but very interesting to hear that you shouldn't always do that.....that you should do *what I said up above* and see which sound better

I LIKE THE STORY AND PLEASE DON"T KILL ANY OF THE MUNCHKINS OFF OR SESSY OR KAGGY!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

AMG That Is SUCH a Good Fic!!!! PLEASE Update Soon!!

With Luv,

Kagome-Chan

This one has a lot of potential. I can't wait to see the next chapter. ^_^Ja ne!