IT;S FREAKING FUNNY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU SHOULD REALLY UPDATE MORE OFTEN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOL Oops Kagome's being bad and for once Sesshy is nervous LOL

Like the story however you need to work on remembering to keep he and her straight.

After being accused of being a “demon”, whatever that was, Kaede tried to purify her, admitted he didn’t look like a demon, said she didn’t know how to send her back into the present...

See what I mean? some grahammer/spelling errors a good spell check can fix and your story seems a bit choppy instead of flowing.

I loved the bit about Sesshoumaru looking like Kikyou. That was great just please don't dress him in miko clothes or a girls school out fit. Keep trying I want to see how you go about this challenge

LOL I love the story can't wait for more chapters. I love the idea of this story being backwards and it is hilarious. Can't wait to read more.

its ok, but it kinda isnt very intresting at the same time. all your doing is switching kagomes name with sesshomaru's and you kinda made sesshomaru seem gay