orchid- Wed 02 Apr 2008
i hope yash gets a beating by sessh for ruin dinner.... and please don't make kag cry... really, give her some dignity and not get all weepy seeing yash... or at least not until she gets home.... or maybe she could show yash that she has truly moved on and he doesn't affect her too much....

Bittersweet Poetry- Sun 30 Mar 2008
Lovely New Chapter ... You Better Update Soon Because That Chapter Didn't End To Nicely ...

FleetingDream- Sun 30 Mar 2008
That was such an evil way to end a chapter. Update quickly please. Nicely done by the way.

Kohana- Sun 30 Mar 2008
i love this story i have not even read all that you have writen and im already in love with your style. you RULE!!!!! Mr. Smiles likes you too!! (*u*) (>*u*)>

Crimson_Angel808- Sun 30 Mar 2008
oh damn you....(whiny tone) it is really good. please update soon

Bittersweet- Tue 29 Jan 2008
i loved the chapter. can't wait for the next one. maybe you could do like he comes into her house or the next he take her home with him. js an idea. so sayonara!

Bittersweet- Tue 29 Jan 2008
i liked this chapter a lot and the movie 300 was a great one was it not? anyway next chappi PLZ'S

tir3dgirl- Sun 23 Dec 2007
OMG! i just love this story!!! i started to cry 2!!!!!!! its so sweet and cute.

BeautifulDeception09- Sun 07 Oct 2007
Aw Adorable!!! Update Soon!!!

luna- Sun 29 Jul 2007
i get the feelling its shippo.....

BeautifulDeception- Fri 27 Jul 2007
I Like This Story Cant Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next!

TONI- Fri 27 Jul 2007
YEH U UPDATE! AND SOON AGAIN!!!

cocoke5- Mon 16 Jul 2007
i love the story and can not wait for more and can not believe that sesshumaru dad is set them up up date soon.

demon13o- Wed 04 Jul 2007
Nice fiction!

I loved the story line, it was well thought of and I hope you update soon!

Ja Ne!

Punk_101- Tue 15 May 2007
That was good keep up the good work! =)

sesshous_girl- Tue 15 May 2007
I love the new chapter and I hope your okay after what happened. Can't wait to read more chapters when you get the chance. It was really awesome how you put your friend in there.

DarkAngel495- Tue 17 Apr 2007
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UpdAte SooN!!! PleaSE? I Love The

Part, Wanna KnOw The 2nd So

Ok??? ThanKs!!

^^

ThanKs

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sesshous_girl- Mon 16 Apr 2007
I love this story and the plot

Eternity of Tears- Wed 21 Mar 2007
awww...cutecutecute chppy. ^_^ very happy reader.

hahaha, I like how kagome listens to jazzy stuff instead of hiphop and what not, very col.

plesae update soon! ^_^

Noacat- Tue 20 Mar 2007
Dude. I love Donna Summers. "Last Dance" is a great song. I actually had a fanfic challenge that dealt with that song... a pity no one took me up on it. Anyway, this story is great fun. Keep working hard!

Crimson_Angel808- Tue 20 Mar 2007
hey you just replace the real chapter ten in the chapter ten spot, i did that too so don't worry

kittycat- Tue 20 Mar 2007
you have mada a mstake with the music
Evanescence is a group and the lead singer is a woman not a man
and as you can see you refered to her as a him and it is a rock band.
"Kagome liked Evanescence, but it wasn't good for her to be listening to him."

DarkAngel495- Mon 12 Mar 2007

DonT WORy DuDe EVen ThouGh IT

wAs ThAt ShoRt I sTIll LikE iT, Oh

For AdViSe If YouR FeelIng A lIttLe

HeadAcHe trY NoT To ThinK sOO

muCh oR tHat wIlL GeT eVeN MorE

wOrse Oh You MadE A gOOd Job

Here iN YouR fIc KeeP iT uP Men.

Eternity of Tears- Sun 11 Mar 2007
Although it was short, it was very enjoyable. =D

Please update soon!

DarkAngel495- Sun 04 Mar 2007
I caNt WaIt tO rEaD tHe nEsT cHaPie!

I wOnDeR hOw wiLl sEsHie aNd

kAgiE mEeT, Oh weLl At lEaSe i'Ll

jUsT wAiT fOr yOu tO uPdAtE tHe

nExT cHapIe....GooD jOb fOr You!

Eternity of Tears- Sat 03 Mar 2007
thank you for emailing me!
I'm relaly intersted in what happens next, so please update soon!!!!! ^_^

love this story so far!

Gothic Lust- Sat 03 Mar 2007
i love it. update soon

MidnightTimberWolf- Sat 03 Mar 2007
I love the story nice plot and things seem to be going smoothly can't wait to see their faces when they meet at last.... Update soon.

A very curious Suzukii- Sat 03 Mar 2007
oh wow it was very nice but could you pls hurry with the chapters >.>" im getting very impatient but it was very good your doin' a great job!
♥SUZUKII♥

Emy- Wed 28 Feb 2007
wow hope more comes soon

Stuck Suburbanite- Sat 24 Feb 2007
The song you were thinking of was "In the Land of Twilight Under the Moon." Here's the hyperlink for the lyrics:

http://dothack.wikia.com/wiki/SIGN_Original_Soundtrack_2

And keep up the good work! I'm lovin' it!

Hannah- Sat 24 Feb 2007
Hi! I've enjoyed your story so far. :) I see you are looking for some help with chapter four. Are you planning to make it a long story? You ended chapter three saying Inu Taisho wanted to talk to his son; maybe chapter four could be their conversation. Also, you haven't mentioned if Kagome actually knew that Inu had a second son, but since she seems rather close to him, I would think she knew. Perhaps you could add in something about her wondering if this was the son she never met. (Since Inuyasha made sure he wasnt around when he brought her home.) I could think of plenty of ideas, but I don't know how much this form would let me type.
Also, I noticed a few small spelling errors in your writing. You might want to just go back and spell check, it would make the reader more comfortable with the story. Your plot seems pretty good so far! I'm looking forward to reading more. :)

Megan Consoer- Sat 24 Feb 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Eternity of Tears- Sat 17 Feb 2007
I very much enjoyed this chapter! ^_^
if it wouldn't be a bother could you please email me when you update?
i'd appreciate it! =D

please update soon!

Raven88- Wed 14 Feb 2007
Awsome job I hope to read chapter 3 soon.
I Can't wait to see how they meet.

slm_candle- Mon 12 Feb 2007
Cool. Now lets see what happens next in this cool saga, shall we? So you know what that means. UPDATE. lol

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