Reviews for Lord of the West by Atierina

KagomeFreak 28- Fri 04 Apr 2008
PLEASE MAKE SESSHOUMARU AND KAGOME KILLLL HER 2GETHER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BUT MAKE KAGOME-SAMA PUT THE FINAL BLOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tsuki Doriimaa- Mon 28 Aug 2006
That's it? That's all that's updated? >_ aw come on there's gotta be more somewhere!? Why are all the good ones possessing fewer chapters then the ones you could do without? (okay, that sounds mean, but I'm sure everyone knows in some way what I'm talking about).

Very good story hun! I love the way you've written it, the plot line is well thought out and in volved. The only thing that casts an unpretty shadow upon the story, is some of your spelling and where you have missing words in sentences that are needed to make it flow. Okies? My suggestion is to read over your works carefully before submitting them, or if time doesn't premit, then seek someone to Beta the chapters for you. ^_^ Its a really good story, I await reading new chapters from it! Please keep writing hun, never give up! You've really got something going here. Blessed Be in all your writings! JA!

swtdrm01- Fri 18 Aug 2006
I love the story. Thanks for updating, hopefully we will see another chapter soon.

Ja ne

Cuddles 4 Sesshomaru- Mon 17 Jul 2006
Hey this story is great and i would love to know what happens and would love to be told when u update so please email me at cuddles4sesshomaru@hotmail.com

YourDarlingWriter- Sun 16 Jul 2006
OMG! ah i luv ur story! whenwill u update??? please update soon. Its such a good story!
Ah and I've never encountered a plot like this, its origonal and I like it. most people are missing originality in their stories and its the same thing over and over...kagome runs away and meets Sesshomaru.
wel update soon!

Cuddles 4 Sesshomaru- Sat 15 Jul 2006
omg this is such a good story and i really like it and would love for you to tell me when u update and stuff so if you could plz tell me when u update and stuff that would be great

THIS IS A GREAT STORY AND I WOULD LOVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO KAGOME AND SESSHOMARU

c4s

Lady Angel of Sleep- Fri 07 Jul 2006
hehe its great ^_^

Cuddles 4 Sesshomaru- Sun 02 Jul 2006
OMG this story is great and i think that you should contiue it for a long time and stuff and well it is a good story and stuff so CONTINUE

KageFaiaDoragon- Wed 21 Jun 2006
haha inu's being a b**ch haha plz plz plz update soon! i luv it! it was great! ... uh ya i hate that too u no wit the conscience and such i really hate that but sumtyms its sorta funny..... but i still hate it cuz ppl make it seem lyk u can actually arue wit ur self... i dont think i no any one who does that..... am i talking too much? kuz if i am i can stop all u haf to do is ask.... o wait u cant ask me rite now.... o well UPDATE SOON!!!! 3 YA!

orchid- Mon 19 Jun 2006
that was a tease.... update soon... please... thanks

shaanjin- Sun 18 Jun 2006
Nice nice!

I would really like to read on. I especially like the guarded Kagome nearly being her old self again when she is with Sesshoumaru^-^

kathy- Sat 17 Jun 2006
omg that women is such a slut.. o well she suits naraku well. lol i love your story expecially cuz kikyou is dead. lol please update soon.

Angel- Sat 17 Jun 2006
its original i like it . i would rather this one be finished then the other i hat naraku he is evil and kikyo she must die any way i love it

kathy- Thu 15 Jun 2006
i love your story. wow you like naraku.. i thought he was a girl the first time i saw him.. well untill i heard him speak. the only thing i like bout him is that he has been trying to kill kikyo since like for ever i actually thought that he had succeded but alas i was tricked. she just wont die ugh!!! lol totaly out of the point. i love your story please write more and update soon

Kit005- Thu 15 Jun 2006
WOW!!! That was a good chapter!!! I hope you Update soon!!!.......... Plzzz Update soon!!!!!!!! Plzzzzzzz!!!!!!! I want more of this!!!!! Don't be perverted about that though!!! ^-^

duke of spades- Wed 14 Jun 2006
i like!!! i am a naraku lover...i know i know weird...but he is so sexy and what a voice! deep and sensual with promise of dark thangs....man turns me on! but anyway back to the review!! this is goin to be good!!! seducing sesshoumaru how cool....kagome is so lucky!!! two sexy men!!!! then inuyasha too....grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr ok this is not a good review.......well i give u a better one next time....until then keep up the good work!

kathy- Wed 14 Jun 2006
i love your story. its diffrent and i have no idea where its going but i guess thats the good thing.. all the mystery either way your story is really good please update more and soon

BananaFlavoredEskimo- Wed 14 Jun 2006
I have no idea what exactly where you are going with this, but i am anxious to find out.

A really interesting story. Hope to see more from you soon.

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