Kagome is so kick ass lol

I noticed spelling and grammar errors. You seem to like to use [woman] for the plural form, when infact it is [women.] If you have problems with spelling and grammar you should try using a Word program that has a spelling and grammar 'cammand' built into it. I like the story, but the errors make reading a little difficult to read it.

Awesome!

Please update again soon.

I'm not sure why Sesshoumaru has to be weak in order for Kagome to have power?  He's portrayed almost as being helpless towards the end of the chapter. 

If you don't have a Beta, perhaps putting the chapters in Microsoft Word and running the grammar and spell check would help make it more effecient for you?

Hiya! I'm really enjoying this story so far. However, please don't take offense, I think you/this story would benefit from a beta reader.

I noticed a lot of typos: i.e. saying ever instead of never. Those were a bit confusing. Overall though, good job

Interesting twists

Though I'm dying of curiosity of who Kagome is and who her parents were....why hasn't Sesshomaru called Ning an and youkai up to arms? Surely he still has seasoned warriors that can train the newbies. And I'm sure he can bribe some dark milks or witches to assist him.....

Holy shit whats going on?? :o

Uh ho spagedios!

Aww you ended with a little cliffy... I hope you update soon, please.

I look forward to more chaptera

Good idea if you meet with sesshomaru XD

What an interesting start to the story! I am very excited to read more!  Thank you for posting it!

This is a very interesting start. I like the strength you've given Kagome, though I'm not sure how she hopes to find her parents...very strange. One note, Rin is a guide, not a guild.

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow She sure knows how to survive!

This is wonderful, I can't wait for the update.

That was Great Kagome's so Awsome in this fic.