This story was nice.

 How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

There are Angels
God put on this Earth
Who care for us and guide us.
You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us.
They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears.
They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile.
They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child.
God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own.
She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown.
She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her
Mother

loved the story.

What? The sex scene was masturbation? A bit disappointing. Hope the squeal will have a treat

Holy hell this was sizzling HOT HOT HOT. Now on to your sequel!

Omg I am so glad I found this fic of yours. I saw the one you are currently updating and decided to read the prequel first. I am soooooo glad I did ...wowowowowow!

Oooo C; Well Looks Like Certain Someone's Want To " plow " Each Other

That was certainly creative and different. I'm glad there will be a sequel bcus I can't help feeling disappointed that there seemed to be so much filler and less interaction between the two. From the setup it seemed that the focus would be on them but it developed more as a traditional chapter story? The way the pace appears to be, it'll be a lot of chapters before things develop between them or even for them to see each other again. (sigh)  

I do look forward to the next update. 

Good Chap :)

I love where this is going please update sokn

Lol Well Sesshomaru Thoughts Of Kagome & Her Scent In Your Room ( as it should be ) Gave You A Little Complication Hm ? xD Great Chap

I swear i am beyond in love with this story and this portrayal of Sess. Keep it coming!

eeep!! I can't wait for the next chapter. This is getting really interesting. 

sesshy is so cute... slow but sweet" ty

Noooooo! Why couldn't they just stay cuddling! ;___;

Is It Hot In Here Or Is It Just Me ? Lol

More please!

Love it love it love it love it!!!! Brilliant ideas, and VERY original!

~Sandreline

Oh that was such a neat chapter. Their auras are already blended and seem very comfortable with each other. Now to get the rest of them in line. LOL! This story is coming along nicely.

I can't wait to read more!!! The whole interaction between Sess and Kags is cute.

Please update soon!

I'm dazed... I need the next chapter... the cliffie!! THE CLIFFIE!!

:)