This has great potential, you just have to work on punctuation. You have too many run on setences, making it confusing and hard to read. Other than that, I really enjoyed these two chapters! 

Omg did Sesshomaru just Kidnap her. hahahahaha.

Interesting... Almost seems like a cross over with another anime.

So will this story be similar to or a crossover with SAO? I'd love it either way! Never encountered a game story with the Inuyasha characters. 

Is this going to be like Sword Art online?? I just thought to ask.

nextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapternextchapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ccan't wait for the next one~

... Is this based off of Sword Art Online?

That was Nice

).) I love it :D hope you make more, I just love the idea of Kagome being a game tester :3 luv Ya! -Hand slowly creeps down-

THis has been good so far. this is gonna prbably remind me of sao. if you need help with mobs or bosses let me know. thank you for combining parts of my favorite animes.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.