Your story is very interesting so far. It is a little skippy in parts, meaning it can be a little difficult to follow where you are going. I would very much like to see you continue with the story.
May I also suggest when including song lyrics in the story to either bold them or italicize them so they are easier to distinguish from the rest of the narrative.
Also, if you would like a beta reader or help with anything please PM me.
I Like your story but you have alot of mistakes. I look forward to the next chapters.
Lisa (Chapter 5) - Mon 04 Sep 2017
I like your story, but I do not tink Kagome has the right to take Rin from the Taisho's they are her family. She needs to stay with them and Sesshoumaru. Besides she is going go have problems with InuYasha. I don't think Sesshoumaru will care or not that Kagome likes him or not.
Ree-san (Chapter 5) - Mon 04 Sep 2017
I enjoy your story but there's a lot of editing needed for missing words, grammar, spelling and punctuation errors. It slows the flow of the story. Perhaps a beta?
Keep posting pleaseeeee!
misty (Chapter 4) - Wed 28 Jun 2017
please, please, please, please, please update this!!!!
Koree (Chapter 4) - Thu 23 Mar 2017
Good chap
I love the story already
Mona (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Feb 2017
Great update... I hope to read more soon.
Mona (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Feb 2017
Great update... I hope to read more soon.
Toni (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Feb 2017
keep it up want to see inu get it in the end
Wonderful story. I forgot how much a fire cracker Kagome was. However, I needs my Sesshoumaru.
rose (Chapter 3) - Fri 02 Oct 2015
please update this story its getting real good thank you
Please update soon. I like this story so far.... Inuyasha is such an idiot I hope he gets what is coming yo him....
Koree (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Apr 2015
Lol Kagome Put All The Tashios In Place
Love the chapter. I can't wait to see what Kagome going to do to Inuyasha. Update soon
Saiya (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Apr 2015
So Awsome Go Kagome you Rock.
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