Holy sheee-it! Such intensity coming from Kagome! I sooo did not see that coming at all. She fookin threatened Sesshomaru! What a hoot! I jest not, I just sat infront of my ipad for a few seconds with my mouth gape thinking...OH NO SHE DIDN'T! OH YEAYS SHE DID! Well done!!!! It is always a pleasure to read your updates.
I've missed this story of yours. I'm glad to see you've updated. A great third chapter. Inuyasha's passed on, Kagome behind with their children a more mature Shippo and Kita, an ancestor of Rin's. Goodness, that girl spat out venom at Sesshomaru. I wonder why exactly that is? Did Inuyasha really get into her head or does she feel neglected by Sesshomaru? Being that it appears this might be the first time they are meeting. She feels that she never mattered to him - interesting. I'm curious to see where this journey will lead Kagome and Sesshomaru. Well done.
please make a big adventure... but then you added hanyo children to it,meaning that perhaps kagome cant travel long distances. still, i would like you to not forget of your story and leave it hanging like others, its beginings are are good ,soft kagome like you said has matured maybe a more seasoned warrior...smart,powerful as a miko too. i liked the way you expressed her state,her speach and demeanor,also you make details which is something i enjoy. the "now what?" ending was like....i dont know...to me unexpected...was that you maybe? you should continue...people tend to read and not review but inmy case i finally have internet again and i have found my dokuga password meaning ill start reviewing my faorites from time to time..just so you know this one has been added!
