It was a very charming story. The only thing is that it requires some puncuation and gammar fixes.
Great story! I loved it! Perhaps someone could draw Kagome, Sesshomaru and their children?
Maybe you could write a sequel of the family set in the future? Well, at least think about it. Thanks!
Such a good story. Loved it.
I meant the review for chapter 7 and basically the whole story. Sorry about mix up on the chapters.
This turned out to be a lovely story. Nicely written. I loved it. Great story.
Great end to a great stoiry
Well that was interesting
Great chap
More, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
Great update and yes love sesshy the dad.
Mona (Chapter 3) - Sun 07 Feb 2016
Wow... Usually it's first comes marriage (mating) then comes baby (pup), I guess he got carried away unless he is already mated but desires Kagome.
On the 10th can't wait.
Wow this story go me hook line and sinker.
Both chapters are nice, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
When I saw this labeled Complete I went, "noooooo'". This is a very good story. It was sweet and even though it is only two chapters it didn't feel rushed. Any chance you might continue it? Pretty please. Regardless, excellent story and hope to see more stories from you soon.
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
So fluffy and perfect for this season. I liked the way you characterized Sesshomaru and Kagome and thier odd situation. You made it seem realisitc. I also echo the sentiments of the previous two reviewers and see the potential for a further chapter or two that shows Kagome and Sesshomaru's interactions further down the road.
Great job!
This was really sweet and even though it's completed, I could see that it has the potential to have another chapter or two ;p. Thanks for the warm fuzzy at the end there.
This was a very nicely written little tale. There were a couple of misspells and grammatical errors but nothing detrimental to the story. This seems like it would be a good beginning to a longer story...hint...hint. Not expecting one but just asking if there would be more to this one-shot? Great job!
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