I don't want to sound like a dunderhead, but why did he kill Inuyasha? I know that he desires her but to kill him makes no sense to me. Does she know he killed Inuyasha? Or was he in hell visiting Inuyasha?
This is a wonderful story with great imagery. I am a little lost as to the storyline surrounding Inuyasha--is it the loss of Kikiyo that has finally driven him insane; why does Sesshoumaru search him out and kill him and why on the second visit and not the first? Sorry, I'm being so dense????
Awesome start to your new fanfic, hellcat! Though there are only 100 words per chapter and not that many written as of yet, your words still hold such strong feelings no one could possibly misunderstand--if they don't lack comprehension skills that is. I can feel Sesshomaru's yearning for Kagome, and he obviously believes they are unrequieted. But what exactly are he feeling? It sounds deeper than lust but I wouldn't go so far as to say it is love so early in the story, but it's obvious he wants her. An obsession *-* That's the word!
As always, your word choice and turn of phrase has me possitively breathless! It's so beautiful and impacting. You make emotions more than just words. I can feel them, if that makes any sense.
I can't wait to see where this new drabble goes! :D
