I'm not one for violence but glad she beat him up  looking forward to more chapters 

A very interesting story i just had found! Another story to stay tune. Thank you!

Sad but lovely. Can’t wait for more.

can't wait for more

"it may be the only cardio his poor heart gets until he dies." I can't stop laughing! XD

Great chapter

Definitely dark and moving looking forward to the next update

This plot is very interesting! I can't wait to read more :D

Well I am all for this becoming a full story! Hopefully you will continue! Thx for updating!

Cheers!

Keep going! Lol :) it's different

 I would love to see this become a full story and not just a little one shot it leaves you wanting so much more. 

Love the setup. I definitely think you have the beginnings of a really good story here, and I would love to read it! 

It would be interesting to see this develops into a story. If you decide to create a full story, I will read it. 

I see lots of potential, good chapter, keep it 
coming

I like it. But like another person said, I'm interested to see where you take this and how it will come together. Either way still a great one-shot

Make it a story

Yes definitely make it into a story.  I think you could take it far.  Go for it!

I'd read a story with this plot if you continued it. C:

Yeeeaaahhhh....This little oneshot needs to be expanded into a story. While I got the gist of whats was going on, I feel like there were still some unanswered questions. This has potiential.