I can't remember if I read this before, but I'd I did it was years ago, so I'm glad I pressed "random" as an option because this was a cute read
lara (Chapter 1) - Sat 28 May 2011
this was good but would have been better longer
| Haha.... Oh gracious. The 'double entendre' nearly killed me. ^_^ Hilarious. (I'm a huge fan of puns and what-not.)
| Haha.... Oh gracious. The 'double entendre' nearly killed me. ^_^ Hilarious. (I'm a huge fan of puns and what-not.)
wawa (Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Sep 2008
| That was great. The end was my favorite!
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Sep 2008
| This was really cute! Very well done! Loved it, every last line...
(Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Sep 2008
| Well, let me explain the Spanish Lemon thing. My mom and aunt did a tour of Europe 30 years ago for 6 weeks, and while they were in Spain, they ate a lot of fresh fruit. Including a lot of old-fashioned lemonade with lemon halves in it - with occasional seeds. My mom, being a frugal and resourceful young lady, tried saving the seeds and bringing them back along with some orange seeds as souvenirs - not really to grow, but more to have as a reminder. Customs wouldn't let them through. So....my tribute to Spanish lemons.
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Tue 23 Sep 2008
| I really loved this story, gotta say thought they 'jumped' each other a bit too quickly, but other than that it's was perfect. Great job.
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
| Omg i love you "Nobody picks lemons like you." I LOVE IT I LOVE IT. I cant believe you pulled it off i was wondering the whole time! It was great You know whats really funny my family is from spain!!! Thanks so much best raffle win ever!!!
Zyren (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Sep 2008
| hot damn! can i please get some lemonade!! Whew that was hot. very nice, i loved it from beginning to end. its was short but sweet...or should i say sour? lol anyway great job.
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