Awww, this story is so interesting and the characters so well written. I hope you will finish this story one day :)  

Nooo don't lose interest! Lol. May inspiration find you to continue this fic :)

I must say I was happy to see an update for this fanfic and i enjoyed reading it.  Hopefully you will be able to update again soon.

Good start there is a lot of smoothing needed 3rd chapter ... Stiff and a bit hurried, you have a good start for a well rounded story maybe a look through will inspire filling it out right

It's a shame you've lost interest in the series. This would have made a great story. 

Great chapter, keep it coming.

Ive really enioyed what you have written so far! Please continue. Sesshoumaru is has quite the snarky personality. I love it. 

Oh my, what a cliffhanger, I love this.

Please update soon :)

I quite like this. Sesshomaru's portrayal is very interesting, a deviation from the normal and refreshing. The plot has barely begun to unravel, but it shows great promise. The only thing I can offer as criticism is that you need to fix your verb tenses.

Thank you for sharing this story and I look forward to the next chapter. :)

Sailor Moon new anime will premiere on July 5. This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

What Makes A Dad

God took the strength of a mountain,
The majesty of a tree,
The warmth of a summer run,
The calm of a quiet sea,
The generous soul of nature,
The comforting arm of night,
The wisdom of the ages,
The power of the eagle's flight,
The joy of a morning in spring,
The faith of a mustard seed,
The patience of eternity,
The depth of a family need,
Then God combined these qualities,
When there was nothing more to add,
He knew His masterpiece was complete,
And so, He called it...Dad.

Happy Father's Day!