Reviews for Asphyxiate by Lace

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amanda (Chapter 11) - Fri 06 Jun 2014

Good chapter!


amanda (Chapter 10) - Fri 06 Jun 2014

Awesome!


wonderbug (Chapter 9) - Thu 05 Jun 2014

Wow, what a cool concept for a story - I'm loving this! :) Very well written - your descriptions are vivid and gripping. The shadow creatures in Kagome's visions give me the chills. But *are* they just hallucinations? I wonder... And could there be more to this doctor character than meets the eye?

Looking forward to more :)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Thu 05 Jun 2014

Keep it coming.

 


cakeiton (Chapter 9) - Thu 05 Jun 2014

Dappled shade... damn that's good. I really like that description.

Yeah! Curse that well, Kags. Looking forward to more!


amanda (Chapter 9) - Thu 05 Jun 2014

Can't wait for another chapter


amanda (Chapter 8) - Wed 04 Jun 2014

Great chapter. Keep it coming!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 8) - Wed 04 Jun 2014

Nice chapter, keep it coming.


cakeiton (Chapter 8) - Wed 04 Jun 2014

I can sense how lonely she feels crowded by people and apparitions when she walks outside. Well done!


merrrcurius (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Jun 2014

This story is pretty neat. Can't wait to read more. I like how graphic it is. And the way you write it, actually makes sense.


cakeiton (Chapter 7) - Tue 03 Jun 2014

I'm am more curious over their motivation than what they actually are now. As in, even if they were named, their mystery seems so much deeper. Looking forward to the next one!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 7) - Tue 03 Jun 2014

Great story, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!


amanda (Chapter 6) - Tue 03 Jun 2014

This is interesting. I like it!


cakeiton (Chapter 6) - Tue 03 Jun 2014

Good doctor.


cakeiton (Chapter 5) - Mon 02 Jun 2014

hmm... i wonder what they are. Looking forward to more!


cakeiton (Chapter 4) - Mon 02 Jun 2014

Poor girl goes through so much. I can imagine a gaggle of Kagomes from all these angsty fanfics with picket signs protesting.

 


cakeiton (Chapter 3) - Mon 02 Jun 2014

I wonder was she is lying. Is it because she doesn't want help? Because she knows it's real, and doesn't want to listen to a shrink discount her? I am very curious.


cakeiton (Chapter 2) - Mon 02 Jun 2014

Oooo, I like this Kagome so far.


cakeiton (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Jun 2014

AAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNND, hooked


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