Great chapters, keep it coming.
| This new development is exciting!! I wonder what she's going to discover now...secrets, mysteries, Sesshomaru trapped inside a magic lamp. Just kidding about the last one. XD I love your choice of words and flowing metaphors!! Looking forward to more! :) P.S. Wonderful use of the prompts!    
 | Nice chapters, keep it coming.      
 | I sense some dramatic intrque or a shift in the story coming up!    
 | i know those feels, kags.    
 | I adore when Hojo is not made into a jealous bad guy. He never was, and people aren't so black and white. However, he is unshakably noble, and I like that you have him like this here.    
 | good word choices in this one!    
 | It is!!! And the visuals are amazing. This is not good times for Kagome    
 | .... Oh what!? Is it who I think it is???    
 | This is dark and vicious and I love it.    
 | Oh, what!? That's sounds like how the well takes her, but instead of cushioning blue light, it is darkness! Love it!    
 | I like the tone of this. She is disconnected from the world, but it is written in present tense. Like, it is her otherwordly visions that are keeping her anchored.    
 | Ojii-san is perfect!!! And so is Kagome's heart. She would do something like that regardless of who could see or what they would think at the time    
 | Well... THAT is not going to help her mood any lol. Little brothers...    
 | I love the ominous Wisp character    
 | So the slightly touched in the head knight enters. Lol I'm sorry, but I can't see Hojo as 'sane' either. Looking forward to those updates! Thanks for the wonderful read, Lace! ^^    
 | Good, keep it coming.    
 | Looking forward to the more updates, I'm so excited for how you're going to fit Sesshomaru in!    
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