^_^ lovely especially the part where all the ranks agreed to stay neutral :) that was heart warming
I'm glad to see things are ironning out well for the West. Kagome has gathered acceptance of Sesshoumaru's position and what it means. Sometimes decision will be made that she may not agree with but must accept if she is to be his mate. Sesshoumaru has learned to trust Kagome wholeheartedly. That means realizing that she was not going to run away from him because of every decision he makes that some would feel was ruthless.
I think they both have come to a deeper understanding of themselves and their relationship with each other and that is what manifested in this chapter. I'm glad to see Inuyasha finally get his happy ending. It was well deserved. Once again, Kagome stepped up and the respect she garnered from the ranks prove to be useful and motivating at the same time.
This was somewhat what she was hoping to achieve; a unity that would benefit all ranks. While some are still showing disapproval, the Sho, Gon, Tsu, Dai ranks have proven to be beneficial to her and her to them.
This entire story has been a journey for Kagome, Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha, and even the ranks. Everyone has benefitted in some way. I'm so sorry to seen this story end. I have never been disappointed with any chapter you have written. This will probably be one of my most favorite stories ever. I usually bookmark stories like this so I can go back and read them days, weeks, even months later.
Your character development has been on point this whole time. I have always loved Sesshoumaru's position in this story. He maintained his role despite his emotional concerns and that is important to me when you are playing with his character.
Kagome is always stubborn but determined when she is trying to achieve something. You highlighted that well. The love she has for friends and the motivation and drive to help them, despite her own feelings; this took us on a emotional rollercoaster ride. I don't think I have ever been this frustrated with Kagome's character ever.
This story has been been fun. I enjoyed going on this journey with you. You continue to prove your creativity and wonder in you other story "His Milestones". Yes, I've been following it. Can't help it you have me hooked on your writings.
I going to hate seeing that last chapter.
Great job. (^_^)
-Moonlight Rose
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Jan 2015
OMG!!!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!
The only thing I DON'T like is the thought that after one more chapter your Fabulous Fic while be at an end....
Anonymous (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015
Love Chapter 36.....
Faced with aggressive behaviour from jealous demonnesses, Kagome receives loving support from Sesshoumaru, and the strength of Chikas's friendship.......
Rhoyu has taken his rightful place as DaiYoukai of his lands......
While butting heads with the stubborn Southern Lord in an attempt to make him reconsider a mating between Inari and Inuyasha she finds all the ranks standing with her as their Hime. Seeing that he has no support the hard headed Lord reconsiders.
And looks like we have two very happy couples about to find all their dreams come true....
**sigh**Lovin' It!!
~~*Sigh* It was beautiful... ^____^
I am in love with your story. I could kick myself for not reading it sooner. Your story reads as a romantic epic. The character development is immpeccable. It is rare that anyone makes a villan that is both evil and redeemable. Kura is one of the best villans I've ever read in Fanfiction; her motives and backstory were great. I didn't see Inari being in love with Inuyasha, that was a total shock and I love it. The trials Kagome and Sesshomaru go through are beyond shallow romance, it's the trials of a true couple. I love that honnor, love and duty are such forces that can make or break chacracters lives. I look forward to reading more of this wonderful story.
naleah (Chapter 35) - Tue 13 Jan 2015
True love understand.
Oh I love this fic! I really like the different rankings and that any kind of youkai could be in any ranking, instead of just dog youkai vs cat youkai etc. You did a great job of world building as far as youkai customs and traditions go. I am interested to see Kagome wield the Hime influence in order to help Inuyasha. I look forward to reading more!
When will this story stop making me cry? *sniffles* If it weren't for my make-up, I would have been a mess, lol.
I'm really, really relieved for Sesshomaru!
And I hope for the best and more strength for Kagome.
And I also cried (inwardly, of course) for Inukimi; it must have been hard to stop the war with her heart breaking for losing her mate to another.
And thank you, for the beautiful chapter.
*sniffles*
ah ha! I knew Kagome would listen and understand! IF one things been constant, its she always tries to help her friends no matter what and she sees beyond what Sesshomaru wants to show. Kagome's insight into Sesshomarus mind has helped their relationship and maybe now he can start strengthing their relationship by actually talking to her and helping her understand more of youkai society and her own power as the Hime.
I believe with Kagome as the Hime and Sesshomaru now mating the Hime, together they can ensure Inuyasha will have happiness. It may cause a lot of tense awkardness and skimishes with Inari's father but it would be worth it to see Inu happy and Kagome become happier because of that.
Also, maybe Sesshomaru has learned that he cannot hide things from the all knowing Kagome ;) Great chapter!
Guest (Chapter 35) - Sun 04 Jan 2015
Kagome is too perfect. It's so sweet - too sweet. I feel like I'm reading a fairy-tale.
P.S. Is English your second language? Your English is really amazing, but I'm just getting this vibe from the story, as a native, born-and-raised-speaking English person.
P.P.S. Good luck finishing the story, nevertheless!
Loveyaa (Chapter 35) - Sun 04 Jan 2015
Quite the chapter! Quite the moving chapter. I wonder if they can both forgive themselves and move on. Hopefully love conquers all. Way for Kagome to be the stronger one and the one not willing to give up. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
OMG
i was tying to torment you by not responding
but you can see how well that worked
OMG TEARS!!!!
love the last two updates I was at work for the first and last updates
can you imagen my tears at work
::sighs::: now to wait for the next one
Ankita (Chapter 35) - Sun 04 Jan 2015
Eeeee :) phewww lovely chapter. .. hehe i m gladd its not ending soon :P
Didie (Chapter 35) - Sat 03 Jan 2015
Ooooh... Sesshoumaru definetely has some issue wiht trust... I hope he'll make an effort to trust, confide and open more open to Kagome next time, cause in the relationship, love is not enough, love even become pointless if there is no trust, openess and communication....But anyway I still love it! Can't wait for the next update Do your best Sesshoumaru's Secret Admirer-san!
melissa k (Chapter 35) - Sat 03 Jan 2015
This is going in a better direction. I loved it! Thank you for the up date and Happy New Year.
thank you very much for updating
sesshomaru realized that loves kagome
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