Really nice way to end it all up. Good job! I've read your other fic and I really like that one too.
| Wow! That was quite the chapter! I love her weapons and her special gifts in using them. Those were very cool. The mating was nicely done.  I noticed a few glaring spelling errors...vein instead of vane when Sesshomaru talks to Kagura; bear nor bare (but you used bare correctly during the mating) and one more...writhing not wreath/wreathing  ( a wreath is a circular decoration usually used on a door). I bring this up because I know it's "only Fanfiction", but that doesn't mean it should be poorly written. I see a lot of this kind of error here, mostly words used wrongly. Read a lot and learn the meanings and correct spelling of words. Great stories are made greater with proper word use. Great job!    
 | Great chapter! Just full of more things going on. I very much like how you  have handled the courting situation. Very nice.     
 | This is moving so nicely along with lots happening. Very nice chapter. Cheers!    
 | Wow! That was a huge, big, stuffed with information chapter ! Nice beginning. Looking forward to reading more of this story.    
 
sarah (Chapter 5) - Mon 25 Apr 2016 | great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!    
 | Awesome this was cute! I emjoyed it immensely!        
 
Dragon (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 May 2015 | very well done    
 | Really well written and entertaining!     
 | I loved this short story. It always was a bit disturbing that Inuyasha always treated Kagome so badly. A sequel would be great. I would love to see what happens with Inuyasha    
 | I am sad that the story has ended but I loved the way you ended it. I loved how Kagome stood strong on her convictions and decided to break ties with the group.  I love your writing style and I am going to now go and start reading your latest story. Fascinating final chapter. Great job!    
 
gabby (Chapter 5) - Wed 07 Jan 2015 | I liked it! Very nice for a short story and it had very satisfying ending! Great Job!    
 
Saiya (Chapter 5) - Fri 02 Jan 2015 | That was a Nice Ending.    
 
Saiya (Chapter 4) - Fri 02 Jan 2015 | So SMEXY HOTTNESS.    
 
tonya (Chapter 5) - Wed 31 Dec 2014 | love this story! great ending!    
 | This story was great and I enjoyed it, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!    
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