As I mentioned before ! Excellent job with this chapter Dream! I can just feel the creativeness flowing through the story. It's awesome! Can't wait for the next installment !
Oh my gosh! The last line totally gave me goosebumps! I am so excited for this story! Keep up the awesome work! :)
I'm absolutely loving this story! I CAN NOT wait to read more!
Ah I love this! I'm always so excited to see when a new chapter is out and I really like this one! I can't wait for the next one!
I like it, it was fun reading. Especially the part the where Rin is just like, okay and just stops asking.
More please
OMG!! AHH!! The suspense is going to kill me! You are doing a wonderful job writing this story! Please update ASAP!!
Uh-oh! So it begins! I love the suspense! Keep it up and update soon!
I love the storyline for this story! It is interesting so far! Keep up th egood work and update soon!
*blinkblink* CLIFFY!!!!
excellent. looking forward to the next chapter
I LOVE this story. Keep writing. I am very much enjoying this. :)
It was so funny when Rin said "Lord Sesshomaru there's something in your pants! I laugh so hard, who is the Inu-Youkai female? Please update the next chapter quick, keep it coming.
It was so funny when Rin said "Lord Sesshomaru there's something in your pants! I laugh so hard, who is the Inu-Youkai female? Please updat the next chapter quick, keep it coming.
Ha I see the part you said you added..lmao Sesshoumaru is totally not prepared for Kagome.! Looking forward to your nect installment!!
great chapter! looking forward to what happens next.
This story sounds interesting and continue, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
This sounds like this would be an interesting story. Keep up the good work. I do however, suggest that you find a beta. There are tons of available beta in forums, I don't want to sound like a mean person or anything. Good luck and I look forward to reading more!
I like it a lot so far! Especially the very beginning. It is well written! I wonder what Kagome was doing trapped under the ice? Anywho, please update soon!
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