Love your story.  Kinda confuse about some stuff and can you get a beta or someone to edit your story for you? It'll make your story even better.
| All ten chapters are nice, keep it coming.
 How God Created Mother
 
 God took the fragrance of a flower,
 The majesty of a tree,
 The gentleness of a morning a dew
 The calm of a quiet sea,
 The beauty of a twilight hour
 The soul of a starry night
 The laughter of the rippling brook,
 The grace of a bird in flight,
 Then God fashioned from these things
 A creation like no other,
 And when His masterpiece was through,
 He called it simply...MOTHER.
 
 Happy Mother's Day!
    
 | Please update soon, I really love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you.    
 | Awesome, keep it coming.    
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nicole (Chapter 2) - Wed 06 Nov 2013 | how is this an kagome nd sesshoumaru fic?    
 | Thank you northpeach, I appreciate it! Great chapter, keep it coming.    
 | This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.    
       
 
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