I loved this story! Sesshomaru/Kagome pairing did not feelk rushed like in many fanfics. Thank you so much for writing such a good story.
| What a lovely story: well-constructed, flowed well and extremely entertaining. A few typos and grammatical errors here and there but no deal-breakers. Most importantly, I love your voice. I don’t really like first person stories but you sold it and sold it wonderfully. Kagome is snarky, fun, cranky, flawed and adorable. When she sing-songed “Someone’s in trouble” to the general, I loled. I look forward to reading more of your work. Cheers.    
 | This story was well done. From inuyasha turning to a baby. To kagome final seeing her family.I loved the whole story. Keep it up.    
 | great story, excellently written. i look forward to what u come up with next ^_^    
 
Toni (Chapter 44) - Sun 16 Apr 2017 | really loved this story and a great ending  thank you     
 
Natalia (Chapter 44) - Tue 11 Apr 2017 | A beautiful fulfilling end! Thx for writing and sharing this!    
 | Hahaha, the old coot will never change. What a wonderful ending!    
 
Kanda (Chapter 43) - Wed 01 Mar 2017 | yes, you evil person. i swore you killed her. all i know is 'tragedy' is one of the genres and i have not had good experiences with those, dearlord. either way, good chapter! poor sesshoumaru must have been scared asf.     
 | Wonderful chapter, the family bonding scene at the end is so lighthearted and sweet!    
 
Kanda (Chapter 42) - Mon 27 Feb 2017 | omg, this is pure evilness! what's happening!?    
 
Kanda (Chapter 14) - Mon 27 Feb 2017 | hey, this is starting to feel like a kingdom hearts adventure. s'gonna be fun. the ox, though. xD    
 | Too much blood loss? exhaustion? twins? whats going on!?    
 
maria (Chapter 42) - Sun 22 Jan 2017 | Whaaat! ? You're mean!  Thas a hell of a cliff!  Love the story by he way    
 | When is the next chapter coming out? I loved this chapter.    
 
Eva (Chapter 41) - Tue 11 Oct 2016 | That was well worth the wait. I laughed so hard at the Bad Doggy!    
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