OMG....Gods where can I start!?, Lets just beging by saying that this was a really good piece of work, I really enjoyed reading it. Hope you update this story soon. Thank you for posting it!
this chapter is really sad, but you did a good job
although I'm not sure what you meant by "Kagome felt her heart stock...."
I get what you were going for overall.
I look forward to more!
~Starfyre