Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
| HI , LOVE THE FANFIC SO FAR GOOD JOB.......KEEP  UP THE GREAT JOB,,,,,,,PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,TDANIEL    
 | This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.    
 
Suki~B (Chapter 3) - Sun 21 Jul 2013 | I am loving this story!    
 | I read the story and I must say i'm impressed with it for your first fan-fiction. I love the foundation and back story in chapter one. And I personally think that you should continue with it until its conclusion. At this point the fic is intrguing and I can't wait until you update. Goodluck!    
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