Oh my, finally one of my favourite authors on Dokuga updates! Hooray! I was afraid everyone had stopped writing, and the thougt was killing me. :D
Anyway, I liked the light-hearted feeling of this chapter. So much has happened to poor Kagome and her friends that they definately deserved this little break. However, I might have to read this whole story again... I remember what happened in the beginning and where the story was left before Christmas holidays, but otherwise I have very limited memory of the plot. On the bright side, this is a very good story... I don't mind reading it again, but in contrary would very much enjoy it.
Keep up the good work! I can hardly wait for the next chapter! :)
Like, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
Loving it so very much, thus far. You've done a spectacular job at making me sympathise with our heroine, and want to strangle Sesshomaru until her is good and dead for being such a jerk. I am certainly hoping that some form of justice is served to the arrogant inu, and that Kagome doesn't simply forget or forgive the fact that he has raped an humiliated her multiple times. That would be rather disappointing, and I do so love watching the old dog brought to heel.
There is one thing I wanted to point out, however. You have used the word 'indigo' a couple of times throughout the story, and I am thinking you mean another word entierly (though the particular word is currently evading me), because as far as I am aware, indigo is a shade of blue, and nothing more.
Anyway, can't wait to read more!
Thanks!!
CR~
Love it so far. Plz keep it coming
Eva (Chapter 13) - Thu 15 Jan 2015
Your update was well worth the wait. I had wondered how you could even start to reconcile the pair, let alone get Kagome's tachi to go along with it. I guess the hardest sell will be Inuyasha, even with the Oracle's intervention. I wonder how will Sesshoumaru react to her kit. I don't think she would part with him. You have me hooked. I enjoy your writing style and look forward to seeing what new plunnies you have in store after you're finished polishing of this wonderful gem.
No Uta (Chapter 13) - Thu 15 Jan 2015
I'm finally all caught up. What a fantastic tale this is! I find it interesting that Kagome is coming to terms with her predicament and that Miroku is also. That they are both thinking this accidental mating was no accident. What an ride...whew! Such intensity in this story, and mind capturing detail. I'm definitely looking forward to your next update. You've got yourself a new fan. Bravo!
No Uta (Chapter 8) - Thu 15 Jan 2015
This chapter...no this entire story is pure bliss!!!!! I had added this story to my favorites list because I wanted to read it. I then received an email notification that you updated chapter 13 and I began to read the story. I absolutely love...no...LOOOOOOOOVE every single word you've written thus far. I'm catching up heh heh. Amazing tale!
samantha (Chapter 13) - Wed 14 Jan 2015
Such a looooooooong hiatus lol these things cause us to have to re read the fanfic to regain interest but great update.. an interesting twist I think you should put a pup in the mix while their traveling this would stretch out the story a little more I know its common in most fanfic but this would kind of force Kagome in a way to eventually return to Sess or consider reutrning for the childs sake you can have Sesshomaru communicate with her verbally through the bond too aside from emotional thing that would be cool... anyways nice fic
I really hope to have an update soon! I mean how long can they run without be caught! Please update soon!
barb (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Jan 2015
Updates = great day! Thank you :D
Keep up the great work!
Awesome update.i hope sesshy gets a he'll more pain in the future hehe
Debra (Chapter 13) - Tue 13 Jan 2015
Good update. I like that she can feel his emotions, this should help her to eventually forgive him.
The story is incredible and I was engulfed In this chapter, I couldn't keep my eyes from the screen as i read word for word, the way you write Kagome and Sesshomaru are especially intiguing, reading the feelings, and putting forth the bitterness as well as the conflict of the relationship they have is bringing me back evrytime to see how it warps and changes along with their feelings towards each other.
The ending of the chapter certainly gave me a bit of relief that, Kagome can have her friends come to save her and this scene also in my opinion portrays hope for her situation, even if there is no obvious as of yet, shinning light at the end of a deep dark tunnel; I eagerly await the next chapter.
Please keep writing and update soon!
Tourmaline Blue
shishi (Chapter 12) - Sat 20 Dec 2014
Where have yo gone?
Alii (Chapter 12) - Wed 17 Dec 2014
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There are no words to describe all the emotions I just went through while reading this chapter. Please I need an update, this shit was magnificent. You must post more please!!! T.T
Orionda (Chapter 12) - Tue 02 Dec 2014
I am in love with your story. There's barely anything else I'm able to say. My love for Sesshomaru's character and hate for Kagome's, are strangely mixing with each other by the lemony stories written by the awesome people here on Dokuga. It's somekind of bitter love relationship between me and the stories ('cause I rarely read anything) and, well I can't help but love it! However, your story along with an another one has amazed me the most on this site. Plus the beautiful cover art for your story... Is simply stunning, vibrant with colors!
I hope to see a new update from you soon. The story is left to such a juicy moment I can't bear it! It's like the highest peak in the plot yet, and I'm dying to know what happens next!
Love from Finland, you more than deserve it! :)
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