You did a great job of writing this from Inuyasha's point of view :)
This is really lovely. It is interesting to see Inuyasha's POV and the ending was surprisingly gentle. I was kind of worried about how Inuyasha will react :)
I think this was really a cute and sweet one shot. :3
Great oneshot!
I loved the InuYasha POV. You did a really awesome job!
I think you kept all of the characters very true to themselves.
Loved this!
~Starfyre
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
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