I really didn't like how Sesshoumaru treated his mother.
Nor did I like the portrayal of Sesshoumaru's mother.
I mean... It's a little disappointing. Sesshoumaru is so honorable... I find it unbelievable for him to hit his mother. And not only hit her, but hit her in front of others. It's too humiliating, me thinks. And also, if I'm not mistaken, Sesshoumaru's mother uses the Meid? necklace to revive Rin. Why would she be so rude about his ward? I dunno. I just don't think that falls onto the canon personality of Sesshoumaru and Sesshoumaru's mother (and their relationship).
I understand that you needed to set the conflict between them so that she actually had something to "punish" Sesshoumaru about, but I think you could have found a... more realistic (in the sense of the Canon realm) way.
Anyway, I'm reading this for the first time, and I like it a lot <3. Kudos for the cuteness and style of writing. I really like it.
Also, I love Kagome's portrayal. And even though Inuyasha seems to be a little overjealous, I like your portrayal of him, too. <3
Let me keep reading to see what happens next. =P
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