This is a good story so far.  I'll have to make sure to finish reading it on ff.net.  I like how it is not rushed and you take the time to add a lot of descriptive detail -- it really helps to convey the emotions of the characters and the overall mood of the story.  I did notice a few grammar issues, particularly with run-on sentences, but other than that, it is a well-written story.

Excellent story! It is very well-written and very descriptive with it's imagery. It's very angsty but I personally think that makes a story more realistic. Life is not always sunshine and lollipops. I can't wait to read more of it.

This is a really good story.  Once I started reading it I couldn't stop,  I clicked on the link at the bottom of the last chapter and finished it. You've done a really good job in the chapters posted her conveying both Kagome's and Sango's loss.  These chapters are very moving.  I won't say much more about the rest of the story, which is posted on Fan Fiction, other than it was good and well worth the read.  

If you get the time and inclination I think you should post the rest of it here as well.  Sometimes people like myself won't read a an incomplete story when the last update is more than 6 months old.  I've just gotten disappointed to many times.  I start reading a story become emotionally invested in it then it will just stop with everything unresolved.  More people might read it if it's complete.

No story is perfect and there were a few grammatical as well as spelling errors here and there but they were minor enough to not detract from the story.  After reading this I'll have to check out some of your other stories too.

Oh, this one is so sad! I have been in a real angsty mood lately, but even this is a little rough for me *sniff sniff*. I will definately go and find the rest of the story. I think you are doing a great job. The last chapter was a little confusing...did Kouga break her arm? Will they find each other? There were a few spelling errors, but nothing major. I thought it was a very interesting plot, even though it is a very sad one. I hope to see more from you!

well from what i have read so far it is a rather good.your plot is interesting if not mildly depressing,there are a lot of deep emotions in there and i like the way you portray it . there are a few spelling and grammar issues here and there, but nothing  little editing wont fix. im looking forward to reading the rest of your story:D

There was a couple of grammar and sentence structure issues but the storyline was very indept and your angst and pain shone through all the snow. Having Sango survive and be separated from Kagome, thinking the latter dead is quite a plot bunny. I really think you should post the rest of the story over here when you can find the time. It's definitely worth the read.

Decent job on the chapters you have posted here.  Story flows decently, great discriptions, easy to imagine.  I would recomend breaking up a few of the paragraphs though as some of them tend to be a bit too long.  On a side note, you should move chapter five to an AN of chapter four as it is against the rules here at Dokuga to have just a note posted as a chapter.