I am loving the story. its is very intriguing. I feel like you have kept the story as close to the characters from the show. Amazing!!! Great job, keep up the good work.
Keep it coming.
All eleven chapters are great, keep it coming.
All eleven
chapters are great, keep it coming.
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
Samara (Chapter 2) - Thu 14 Mar 2013
I'm pretty sure beta's are achieved simply through the connections you make on the site. But I have yet to find anything juvinille in your writing. You are doing really well(or did seeing as this is from 2009)... but anyways, keep it coming I will be following... Toodles
This story is interesting, keep it coming.
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