I liked this a lot! Short and sweet, but a lot crammed in. Great job! 

awww!
But but but this is going s owell!!! Don't end it please!

Loved it!

Loved this story it was a fantastic read. :)

This story is very different...and I really like it...as you said, there are plenty of stories where they have a relationship, mate, marry, etc.  With this one, it isn't just about Sesshoumaru getting what he wants no matter what...in this he demonstrates humility and nervousness of Kagome accepting him...and it is refreshing to see that for once, Kagome is not hopelessly in love with Sesshoumaru the minute she meets him or after what seems like a day of being with him...it follows the path of what a normal relationship would be; an attraction that develops into more...I loved the way that Sesshoumaru assured himself that Kagome could never be what he wanted in a mate and then created standards he never dreamed she would fit...but slowly, he realized that his standards were everything that she was...I think you did a fantastic job!

Wonderful story!!

LUved it!!!! u rocked 2:30 aM were i am and staying up is always worth it with stories like these!!!!

that was a great story ^_^

That was thourghly enjoyable for an early morning, just before bed read.

LOVED IT! All I kept thinking to that point was "Give him a chance, give hime a chance" and then he says that exact thing and it was like YESH!!!! XD

I'm so jealous of your writing! It makes mine feel clumsy, and I enjoy reading your work immensely!

OH! What a conclusion! Oh! I makes me want more because your writing has captivated my imagination. Thanks for a great story!

=O PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Aw it's over? You got to do a sequal!

So awesomely awesome!

I don't want this to be the end though!

Tell me that there's more!

Please?

*grabs Rin to give you her best puppy dog eyes*

More? Please?

~Starfyre

Keep it coming.

that was a really good answer, lol :)

OMG!!! >< i would love sesshoumaru to ask me for a chance ><  update soon :D

love <3

I started to read this story but I had to stop.  Being a grown female, I must point out that a female does not ovulate while having her period. Ovulation accurs in human females 12-14ish days before a womens period.  If a women does not conceive, she will menstarte.  I don't mean to be harsh with the review, but if you are female you should know this, if you,  then maybe you should not be writting stories with MA ratings....