I like the idea of the story. I think if you added more periods to divide sentences it's be easier to read. :)
Ooo, good story. Update soon :)
| okay, thank you for ansering!( i am a girl by the way.... hehehe.....my name Adriana) I really like it so far.
Jill Dozer (Chapter 1) - Wed 20 Aug 2008
| I like it,I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.By the way when will you upload chapter 5 of this story on adultfanfiction.net?
| i like this alot and i already know who the man with the blue eyes are, lolz so please continue soon
| kewl, i like ur story so far (((but as the meticulous reader i am, i have to note that you said 'horned' and ment honnored, i think, it was probably ur spellcheck that messed it up))
| i really like! i love to read fanfics....and some of them arn't that great but i really like your story so far! -I have a question.Is Sesshoumaru the Lord of the west? Or is that his Dad? Also, What time is the story set in?- Hehehe good luck on your stories!
~*Twilight*~
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