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I love the whole concept behind this story but the personalities are just too far off for me. Like Sesshomaru blushing and Shippo not truely caring to the exstent that he should since Kagome is his mother (even if it isn't by blood. Kagome is like the mother that died).
Don't get me wrong I love where this story is heading and I think you are amazing for being able to come up with the idea and even more so to put it up online. But I just wanted to point that small detail out to the reason that I regretfully cannot continue to read this story...sorry it just peeves me to no end.
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Hmm...I wonder what our little Rin is up to. I can't wait to find out! Update soon!!
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Aw how could you stop there! I bet they were gonna kiss! As for what Rin said, I thought it was funny when she said Sesshomaru says it and Kagome goes off on him!
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Sneaky Sesshy...lol I loved it. Too bad Jaken didnt get kicked he really deserved it there. I think Kagome needs some more Daiyouki distraction to make her get over Inuyasha. I mean its like she is holding back or not letting herself be in love with anyone other than Inuyasha. Rin is such a sweet heart in this, I wonder what she will do to get those two together?
Ohhh Rin's going to be little miss matchmaker eh? If anyone can bring two people together it would be her. She's so sweet! Update soon!
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I love the situation of how he is trying to fugure out how to make her his but at the same time remain who he. Will Kouga be in this one, he is always good for so drama...oh the kiss was so close but Im glad you did not do it too soon. Much love and I cant wait for more.
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The different points of view are kinda confusing but other than that, great job.
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