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Kayelyn (Chapter 17) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

Enter Sessmama! And now that I have read this chapter, I think you have created a Sesshomaru that is a good blend of both parents. She's so haughty and I love it! As far as her name goes, I have heard that Viz is naming her Satori, but in the japanese version she was never given a name and refered to as Inukimi. But most of us make up a name for her on our own, something that defines her the way we intend to use her.


Kayelyn (Chapter 16) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

Hmmm...I can't help but wonder is this is an innocent boy wanting to the man and protect or is he is claiming her as pack. Anywhich way, so much adorableness!


Kayelyn (Chapter 15) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

The Chibi is a hero! I like how seamlessly you have blended in his stoic and haughty nature with the open innocence of a child. That is something that a lot of writers who do Chibimarus struggle with, but you have done such a wonderful job of it. Well done!


Kayelyn (Chapter 14) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

Uh-oh....I have never heard the "light sides" sound so ominous before. Now, I'm starting to get a little nervous for our favorite girl!


Kayelyn (Chapter 13) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

Way to go Chibi! Honestly, who could not be happy with a puppy or being a puppy? No one that's who.


Kayelyn (Chapter 12) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

I wonder if Inupapa's attitude had to do with Sessmama or with the fact that Kagome is working with Naraku. Hmm...I guess only going onward will tell. But oh no! We have a sad chibi! No bueno!


Kayelyn (Chapter 11) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

What a jealous little  Chibi! I wonder what the deal with Sessmama is. Whatever it is, it doesn't sound like dinner is going to be a pleasant event at the Taisho house.


Kayelyn (Chapter 10) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

And a newborn Inuyasha too?! ::slides into cuteness and drowns:: I do wonder what it is about Kagome that makes the Inus so interested.


Kayelyn (Chapter 9) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

Ok, I think I may die from the all the cuteness. Now I'm not sure if I want to corrupt you. Dang it! Seriously though, crushing Chibimaru knew exactly the right thing to say. So adorbs!


Kayelyn (Chapter 8) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

Eeeeek! Already he is being a creeper. Watch your back, Kagome!


Kayelyn (Chapter 7) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

AWWWWW! It's a little chibi!crush! Like that you are wanting to take the scenic route. Often times, as writers, we can rush a romance unintentionally with just wanting to get the plunnie out. I think you have set up a wonderful pace, for a nice slow progression of romance.


Kayelyn (Chapter 6) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

LMAO! How adorable, and yet also very true. I think a caffenated child is everyparents nightmare. I can only imagine one with super speed. ::shudders::


Kayelyn (Chapter 5) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

Ooooo Inupapa can be one bad dude! I really like the duality that you gave him in this chapter, the open and affable youkai and then the red eyed beast of a daddy. Well done!

Onward!


Kayelyn (Chapter 4) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

Dun dun dun! I like how you went ahead a took care of the lifespan issue early, and with an idea that I don't think that I have seen before. Kudos to you for that.


Kayelyn (Chapter 3) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

::cackles:: Let the games begin. I know it's silly, but I can't say I wouldn't have done the same thing.


Kayelyn (Chapter 2) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

hahaha! Little pitchers do indeed have big ears, especially when they already have super hearing. I can just see teh expression on his face. Priceless.

Onward!

 


Kayelyn (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jan 2013

Awwww! Chibimaru! How freaking adorable! I love how you have kept him haughty even in child form.

Onward!


Haven (Chapter 60) - Mon 14 Jan 2013

Poor Shippo. Poor Kagome, she's going to miss Sess so.  Poor Sess, having to go to school for who knows how long. I wish they would just get on the same page already!


Kae (Chapter 58) - Thu 10 Jan 2013

THIS. THIS RIGHT HERE. It falls under "cutest chapter I've ever read."  I shall frame it in my wall of fame. yep, there it is.


Haven (Chapter 59) - Thu 10 Jan 2013

The last two chapters were really whimsical which is welcome after all the angst from previous chapters. Sounds like Kagome is lonely and ready for love...I hope she sees very soon.

Thanks for the updates! 


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