All three chapters are great, keep it coming.
It's been five months since you last updated, I'm glad your back. All three chapters are great, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
Keep it coming.
I like the different emotions sifting through Maru. Shows his love for his human pup. Not overly dramatic and Kagome is learning different aspects of her ablities is a nice touch.
(Chapter 1) - Sat 11 Aug 2012
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Thank you for this. I haven't read anything so beautiful in a very long time...You've broken my heart. I can't tell you how very much I loved this and how deeply it touched me. I cried and cried...and it has become so very hard for me to cry, these days. My heart is still aching for them. Your character portrayal was flawless, poignant, and filled with such desperation and love it was moving. Perfect.
that was heartbreaking...*sniff* any more?
Great story, keep it coming.
That made me cry, it was sweet. I wonder what will happen next.
Well, you defenitely know how to write emotion into every chapter. I've only ever cried twice at the death of written characters, and though I didn't cry while reading yours, I did get all choked up. You write beautifully and I hope you continue.
I would ask you why he never used Tensigau(sp?) on Rin or Kagome, but I guess it would ruin the story if he had.
I cried. So sad!!
(Chapter 1) - Sat 28 Jul 2012
Hurray! I got 3 reviews -
Super love to Mary and Maracuya-chan and Sorrows Amaranth!!
Thanks for the comments, guys.
Appreciate it very much.
@ Sorrows Amaranth - Actually it took me 5 years to get to writing this ff up story from Unclenched. So 10 years is no biggie for me.. Teehee =P But not to worry, I aim to write the story on a regular basis. The reason I stopped was because I couldnt see the ending back then. I saw it last night and here I am sharing my story with you guys.
You know ten years is a mighty long time not to update. 0.0'
i'm extremely curious as to who the little girl was at the beginning.
Update soon, yes?
So beautiful, seriously Sophie, you have me here on a crying marathon. The way you write is so honest and beautiful and it really touches the soul. It's like I'm hoping and hoping that Kagome and Sess will finally be together again because nobody should like with so much pain and longing and sadness. Thank you for the story and please update soon!
Mary (Chapter 7) - Sat 28 Jul 2012
If you don't update for 10 years I will... I will... I will cry. I'm such a pussy, but Unclenched and this are killing me!
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