Please update quickly. That was such a mean cliffy and I'd be mad if I wasn't so in need of a new chapter. That was really good, I can't believe is about to end :-|
In my honest opinion, you should have stopped at chapter 6 (or something like that before all this drama started). Now it seems very drawn out, and the situations are very cliche'd. Also, it bothers me that most of the body of your chapters consist of dialogues instead of descriptive text.
Though you are mostly in character, and I can praise you for that at least, I apologize but I will not be continuing the story. Farewell, and I wish you luck in the future,
Me
Manda (Chapter 17) - Wed 20 Aug 2008
Oh my gosh!!!! Thats a horrible cliffhanger D=
i hope they are all okay!
Great story and chapter update soon please!
The suspence is horrible!
Oh No! Poor Kagome! I hope she's going to be alright, I can't have both of my favorite characters dying!
Please update soon, I need to know what going to happen next!!
[[tear tear sniffle sniffle]] i cant believe you ended the story NOOOOOOO, i liked the ending i thought it was nice and sweet. but i just wish you didnt end it but yea, lolz
This is an Amazingly Great story and I loved it very much. I'm kind of sad it's ending but I'm just glad you didn't kill them off. Expecially because it sucks to read a depressing story before you go to bed, lol. Well like I said this is awesome and I'm hoping for a sequel:)
AWWWWWW I DONT WANT IT TO BE OVER SO SOON. THAT ISNT FAIR, BUT PLEASE CONTINUE SOON I WANT TO SEE WHAT ELSE IS GOING TO HAPPEN
FleetingDream (Chapter 16) - Tue 19 Aug 2008
Awesome, two new, really new, chapters! You just made my day. Which is a hard task, I might add, since shool just started. Oh the heartache :-P! Can't wait to see what happen's next!
FleetingDream (Chapter 16) - Tue 19 Aug 2008
Awesome, two new, really new, chapters! You just made my day. Which is a hard task, I might add, since school just started. Oh the heartache :-P! Can't wait to see what happen's next!
I PLAY WORLD OF WARCRAFT TOO D: Oh the hoorrrooorrr of the addiction. =_= lmao good story I love it. LOVE IT!
Possessed (Chapter 14) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
Still reading, still interested. Poor Kagome, I just want to give her a hug and tell her ignore those dumb boys, they're making her miserable!
I like her spirit.
Tilayha (Chapter 1) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
you inuonna!!! How can you be this mean? :-) Naraku or Sesshoumaru.... It would be nice to see her purify Naraku, but Ithink it would be VERY interesting to see Sesshoumaru get a little singed to. Great cliffy, can't wait for the next chapter.
Tilayha (Chapter 14) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
So it was Naraku...and a new bad guy (girl). This is getting interesting. I do wish you would have given us more details of Kagome beating up the slave youki though. lol And now Sesshoumaru knows she cares for him. What is a cold hearted demon to do?? Can't wait to find out.
grr, i hope u don't make Touga into a badguy in this story :(
Great fic. I love your taste in music. Fits the mood for the chaps. Update soon I hope.
damn inuyashas mother is being a real bi**h, gudness in other stories she seems so sweet and kind, but here she refuses to believe that inuyasha is at fault, i cant believe that, but i think you did a wonderful job please continue soon
ShiZ (Chapter 7) - Sat 16 Aug 2008
when they leave the club sesshomaru is driving but he and kagome arrived together in a limo. Just had to point that out.
(Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Aug 2008
in response to ShiZ:
I'm the writer, I'm allowed to make mistakes :) No but seriously I hadn't even realized I did that, my bad. When this chapter was originally written I was going through a rough time personally and Izzy was helping me write. She wrote the beginning and I wrote the end. I apologize for the mistake.
too lazy to log in (Chapter 8) - Sat 16 Aug 2008
If I say it's a masterful ending, will you update faster? lol
I think Izzy did good! But it could have been longer......just a bit. Iliked it......can't wait to read more.
Oh and i read ome of the chapters that you put on A single spark. So ya.......Update soon! Bye-bye!e
Sincerely,
~*Twilight*~
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