Reviews for destined for me by artemise

Chaos_Queen77 (Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Sep 2008
Hey I like the idea of your story but there is a bit of grammar and spacing issues. I would love to help you out. message me if you would like some help. Chaos

cocoke5 (Chapter 4) - Thu 28 Aug 2008
the story is real good and can not wait for more of the story and can not wait to see who is her heir good luck on the story and be wait for more.

Chaos_Queen77 (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 Aug 2008
hn, interesting. post the next chapter soon.

DH7 (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 Aug 2008
THis isn't canon D:

Jill Dozer (Chapter 1) - Sun 10 Aug 2008
It's a good story so far but for a suggestion you should put a space between paragraphs I find it a little hard to read your story when it's like that.

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