Finish this story. It's intriguing.

Keep it coming.

Diane:  some words you have to add to spell checker yourself, depending on what software program you are using.  Those 2 words should be in there though.  Mine never ceases to amaze me with its lack of knowledge.  lol

Lol - yes, she is seemingly more dense than an oak tree at the moment.  I thought I had a bit of catching up to do...but it was only 2 chapters.  ^.^  Hope you update soon!

I liked it overall, but you have 2 word choice errors in the 2nd 'paragraph', defiantly = rebeliously, the spell-checkers won't even give definitely, which was the word you probably wanted to use, as an option unless you spell it almost correctly. Venerable = accorded a great deal of respect, esp. because of age, wisdom, or character. I think you wanted vulnerable = exposed to the possibility of being attacked or harmed, either physically or emotionally.

aw, that was adorable!

Sesshomaru's observations are really funny too.

I cant wait to see what happens next

Theres one word to this chapter but I can not say hehe ':)

Great story, keep it coming.

I read this this morning, but since I can't post from work, I had to wait until I got home.  Thank yous for the double update.  I was about to give you a nudge to see what was going on (@.@)

What an interesting way for him to show her everything (or part of everything) that he did.  Man she seems so clueless, but I like the emotions he showed her as they went through them.  Hope you update again soon!  You were missed all this time!  -.-

As a side note:  Nope not from MN and have never been there, but I know who he is.  Had to learn about him from all those educational books my mom bought when my siblings and I were little.  Yeah, I love to read (ain't that obvious?).

I'm really enjoying this story....lol.

I really like how that chapter came out! there was something really sweet about sesshomaru letting Kagome into his head like that and sharing his feelings with her.

I cant wait to see what else you have planned. :D

Hm, I cant think of anything to say about either holiday :/ but i do know who paul bunyan is though! I think that counts for something :)

Humor she says. Haha ^.^ (:'

I can't wait to find out what happens next!

O_0 woah!

what a cool power to have!!! I thought he was just gonna kiss her or something.... XD I love being wrong.

Ooohh! This is getting good!

Hahaha, what a sesshomaru way of telling Kagome he has feelings for her! Lol, Agh I wanna know how she's gonna react! :D

And yay for me being the holering winner!!!! XD

OH, and the plot thickens!

WOMAN GIVE ME A NEW CHAPTER OR I WILL TIE YOU TO A CHAIR AND EAT COOKIES IN FRONT OF YOUR FACE....AND THEY'RE CHOCOLATE CHIP TOO!!!! XDD

Hmm...could that be Kagome's way of getting a direct answer from Sesshomaru to the **ahem** more than one question she asked for?

Hollering for the next update!!  I won't yell because that's just rude.  If I had the icon I would be jumping up and down and waving my arms.  Will that work???  Thank you for this update though...I have a good start to my day now.

Yes, evil - and evil does not cower!  Gee!  I'm still sitting on the edge of my chair with each chapter and sputter because (1) I either read them too fast or (2) - which is more than likely - they seem to be short and (3) I just really like the story!  Thank you for the updates!  ^.^