I liked it but it seems like you skipped a word here & there so some parts didn't make a whole lot of sense, also when you used the word weary did you actually want to use that word or did you mean wary? Weary means feeling or showing tiredness, esp. as a result of excessive exertion or lack of sleep, so it doesn't really fit anywhere you used it, wary means feeling or showing caution about possible dangers or problems: "dogs are often wary of strangers".
I LIKE THIS STORY KEEP WRITING ITS REALLY GOOD CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
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