The characterizations are good and the description is just right. Don't worry bout it. You're just making me nervious leaving the ending of this chapter like that.  -grins-

Great story, Happy Mothers Day!

This is a pretty good first chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more! :D 

The start of another fabulous story! <3333 I really like the first chapter. :D

Excellent chappie, please continue this story until it is finished, it is fascinating!

I love it so far, it is very refreashing I like how you keep Sesshomaru in character, alote of writers have a hard time in doing so, and I love how you build it up, the details in this story is amazing, I love the fact how you put information about first borns and how there names are giving that is like "Wow", keep it up I can't wait to read the rest.

Update soon.

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megan007

I do love a good mating season fanfic, this seems good, and well into his character insead of out of character.

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This is so interesting! I wonder what's wrong with inuyasha and if it has anything to do with the mating season. I cant wait to see what happens when sessh comes into the picture!

I dont think you can ever have too much detail. It gives the reader a chance to visualize the story even better so dont worry about that.

I cant wait to see what you have planned for this story! untill next time!

I like it! Really interesting so far, update soon~ please ^_^

Wonderful story thus far!

I loved the concept!  Great start!  I can't wait for more!  I always love how you build Sesshomaru's character, he's always so cool and calculating.  You do it so well!  Please write more!!

ohhhh more!!!!!!!!!! good job!

Poor Inuyasha haha

Awesome first chapter and very descriptive (thankfully!).  However...GAH!  what a horrible cliffie!  Hope you update soon!

This story is interesting, please update soon.

I'm really into this story. Update soon!

You got me, I am in intrigue and want to know what happens next!

Oh :D Dreamerz inlove with this story ^.^ I always enjoy a good Sesshoumaru in heat story :D  I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter

Lots of Love,

~Dreamerz~